Thank you for the book,
I read it to DD1 (3) as soon as it came, and I also had DS (10) nonchalantly peering over my shoulder as I read!
The children enjoyed it, although I think it is a little long/waffly for a 3 year old (we usually read Puddle Lane, Peter and Jane or similar books).
I didn't mind the illustrations - they are a little messy, but that's part of the appeal of Alfie books from what I remember. However, I don't remember them being so long, but it has been a couple of decades few years since I last read one!
The build up to Christmas was sweetly described, and Shirley portrayed some very typical emotions experienced at Christmas very well!
The only thing that disappointed me a little was the reference to church. As a practicing Christian, it would have been nice to see Alfie visit the church/take part in a carol service, as in my mind, Christmas wouldn't exist without Jesus.
Please don't flame me! Obviously you don't want to stuff it down readers' throats - that's not what this book is about, and we are/this book works for a multicultural society as mentioned in a previous post. But I found it sad that Alfie sees mum and grandma go to church, and he stays at home with Dad cooking dinner. I'm not terribly familiar with Alfie books - does he ever get to experience church?
DS picked up on Alfie not going to church, and DD1 hasn't asked me to read it to her again. I shall keep the book on my shelf, and read it some more to DD1, but it's not a book I would reach for first. Sorry.