Spotted an error on your childcare.co.uk listing - CBR, what's that?
Consider rewriting the About Me section - you don't need to give your age, as that system shows it based on your profile. Use capital letters at starts of sentences, for I. If you can, increase spacing between paragraphs.
Don't go into quite so much detail on things that change... so don't say a month without giving a year. Compress the amount of information you are giving, so that it highlights better the key points such as the schools you collect from (which you do list), what you provide within the fee, mention that you have a garden but also take to local parks.
I is used a lot. Try to avoid it where possible by listing things and by using phrases such as "Your child will" or something else to make the reader feel involved, not being lectured at.
Your current tags:Evening Babysitter, Weekend Babysitter, Daytime Babysitter, Childcare Qualifications, Ofsted Registered, CRB Check, First Aid Training
Edit the tags so that it lists the services actually provided - Registered Childminder, Childminder ... check to see what options the system lets you use.
Do this sort of modifying of ads for all places you advertise, so that the focus is on Childminding rather than other things.
Does doing Cubs mean you can't childmind as late one evening a week? It's the first question that popped into my head when I read that you did Cubs.