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Name for a fictional 11 year old girl please

58 replies

Ponymum · 31/05/2009 16:20

Well you lot seem to know what you are talking about, so would you mind suggesting / commenting on names for a fictional girl I am trying to create?

I am writing a book for ages 9-12. Three girls aged 11 are fiends. Two girls are Polly and Annabel. Need a name for the third friend. Any suggestions?

Constraints are:

  • Needs to be distinct from the other two names so that it is easy to tell the characters apart
  • I want to avoid having all three girls with predictable middle class girly names, IYKWIM! i.e. reject Charlotte, Olivia, Lucy, etc
  • I want a slightly "older" name, i.e. not top of today's popular list. But is anyone actually called Karen, Rachel, etc these days? Is that believable?
  • The character's dad is something like a property developer, made his own money but not born to it
  • She is currently Melanie which I think works for her, but I want to change it as it sounds too similar to Annabel (Mel, Bel, both 3 syllables)
  • It would be ideal if it worked with Sykes as a surname.

So sorry that I am asking about a fictional person's name when there are real babies out there needing names! But if you can spare the time it would really help me out.

Any suggestions?

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FeelMuchBrighterToday · 31/05/2009 17:20

you need a name that both has a sort of imperious ring to it but can also be (perhaps shortened?) affectionate and approachable

like, say, from Georgiana to George?

GossipMonger · 31/05/2009 17:39

What about Maggie?

Maggie Sykes?

Why does it have to be Sykes?

Jeffa · 31/05/2009 17:52

Kerry

Catherine/cathy/cat?

Jessica/Jessie/Jess

Tina

Rachel

Christine/Chrissie/Chris

Jasmine/Yasmin/Tamsin

Eloise

Emma

Sarah

Judith/Judy/Jude

Julie/Julia

Sophie

F leur

Kate

slowreadingprogress · 31/05/2009 18:25

I think Jessica Sykes sounds good. Quite 'angular' at first but when she comes over all nice and kind it could be nicknamed Jess or Jessie. It's a very definite name.

Ponymum · 31/05/2009 18:33

It doesn't have to be Sykes. It would juist be another thing for my brain to have to think up again if I changed it!

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thirtysomething · 31/05/2009 18:34

Ruth Sykes sounds great and is a timeless name, as are Elisabeth, Catherine, Sarah and Rachel. Agree Harriet a very good choice too - also what about Heather,Hannah, Miriam, Grace,Emma, Alice, Frances?

boodleboot · 31/05/2009 19:00

i think georgia sykes sounds better

Kaylo · 31/05/2009 19:32

How about:-
Selina Sykes?
or
Sabrina Sykes
Alexandra Sykes (or Sandy for short)
Shannon Sykes
Sadie Sykes
Shelley Sykes
Shauna Sykes
Sian Sykes
Sienna Sykes
Suzannah Sykes
Stacey Sykes

HTH

xx

LessThenIdeal · 31/05/2009 20:01

Madeline

Joanna

Rhian

Rowenna

FairLadyRantALot · 31/05/2009 20:06

Trying to think what the names were around the time my es was born (he will be 13, but roughly there)...

Jade
Claire
Amber
Emily
Naomi
Nataly
Bethany
Helen

conniedescending · 31/05/2009 20:06

Summer Sykes

wahwahwah · 31/05/2009 20:06

Katie
Alice
Poppy

jkklpu · 31/05/2009 21:11

Donna

GossipMonger · 31/05/2009 21:44

Joanna Mason

Josephine Sawyer

Helen O'Sullivan

Catrina Foster

Louisa Jenkins

Nell King

Briony Pirsons

MrsWeasley · 31/05/2009 21:50

Emma
Georgia
louise
Amber
Jade
Sian
Claire
Jennifer
Elizabeth
Katy
Kayleigh
Lorna
laura
?

Anygood?

pinkem · 31/05/2009 21:51

I vote Emma!

pranma · 01/06/2009 09:55

I love Joanna with Jo or Josie for short
still think Laura is good with Sykes could be Laurie nn

Kayteee · 01/06/2009 10:09

Tamsin or Verity

EyeballsintheSky · 01/06/2009 10:20

13 yo girls I know are

Sarah
Caroline
Emily
Laura
Anna

thedolly · 01/06/2009 10:22

Suzie

dongles · 01/06/2009 12:07

Kate
Nell
Fern
Joanne
Nicky
Ellen

Love this thread. I posted for a fictional 11 year old girl before (but didn't let on).

dongles · 01/06/2009 12:08

Claire

scarletlilybug · 01/06/2009 12:30

Maia/Maya?

Louise?

Natasha?

Natalie?

Melissa?

Hannah?

Rowena?

Ponymum · 01/06/2009 13:17

This is great, thanks. Loads of great suggestions. I have come down to:
Rebecca Sykes
Jessica Sykes
Rachel Sykes

There are other names suggested which I think are really good but I can't use them because they are DD's name, my name, my mum's name, another character's name, etc! (Sorry if your suggestion is one of these.) As it is, if I use Jessica then another character in the book needs a new name... . But that one is less critical and easier to replace if needed.

I like Rebecca but my only problem is how to shorten it, which 11 year old girls do. The book is narrated in the first person by Polly, so it has to look and feel convincing on the page as she tells the story. Does she say Bec, Becca, Becky, or Becs? (Jessica is easy to shorten to Jess, and Rachel is just Rachel, which is fine.)

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FairLadyRantALot · 01/06/2009 13:25

Becs...that is what my friends daughter is referred, too...