Can you say more about this, @ThompsonTwin? As in, do you have some information, even if you can’t say any more? That someone who figures in a section of TSP rewrote the section in which they figure multiple times?
I mean, yes, having a friend as a trusted first reader isn’t unusual. I always read a novelist friend’s work before her agent does, and make suggestions about what needs fixing, and say what’s working well. She trusts me, because I’ve known her work longer than her agent or any of her editors at various publishers, and knows I know what she’s aiming for. And I did ask to be left out of a memoir she wrote about a period living abroad (mostly because I thought the bit where I figured, a rather eerie trip, worked better if I wasn’t in it!)
It’s fairly standard to send people who feature in a memoir the sections where they appear to them ahead of publication, both to check the accuracy of your recollections and so that they’re not going to sue for defamation if they’re identifiable.
But the person who doesn’t like they way they’re represented wouldn’t usually do a rewrite themselves, they’d say what is ‘wrong’, ask for it to be altered and want to see the rewrite.
The mind boggles at what someone in TSP might have found wrong about their portrayal, given that the book is about 90% pure fiction. I mean you can imagine ‘Polly’/‘Anne’ saying ‘But I didn’t force Tim to work in a freezing, half-converted shed all winter and I didn’t throw you out for a paying tenant, I let you stay in a nice holiday let for free for eighteen months despite knowing you’d stolen my grandmother’s life savings, and asked you to move on to another empty family house when I realised you were planning to leech on me forever!’
But ‘Anne’ was clearly never asked about her portrayal…
There aren’t many characters other than the Walkers, anyway, and most of them they would have had no way of contacting… (or they were fictional).