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To not understand this homework! Please help!

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ThatEdgyHedgehog · 02/05/2024 12:16

Please help, I am trying to help (or at least I was last night) with this apostrophe task. I thought I understood. It seems I do not.

In the forest, the wolves' howls’ echoed as the trees' branches’ swayed in the wind. Underground, in the foxes' home, they huddled together to get warm. In the trees’, the squirrel’s feet pattered as they scrambled up and down the branches’ looking for food.

Is that correct? Why does branches have an apostrophe? Howls'?

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WheelySquirrel · 02/05/2024 12:17

What was the actual task?

Brendabigbaps · 02/05/2024 12:17

What was the task?

piglet81 · 02/05/2024 12:18

Some of those apostrophes are correct and some are not. Is the task to identify he correct ones?

curlywurlymum · 02/05/2024 12:18

I’m guessing the task is to remove / correct the apostrophes?

idontlikealdi · 02/05/2024 12:18

If the task was to place apostrophes it is very wrong.

XiCi · 02/05/2024 12:18

There are a lot of errors in that paragraph if that's what you mean

KittyCollar · 02/05/2024 12:18

The only correct apostrophe is the one after foxes

crumblingschools · 02/05/2024 12:19

Some of those apostrophes are wrong, which I assume is the task. Or is this the answer (which is wrong!)

XiCi · 02/05/2024 12:19

Ah yes, I imagine the task was to remove the incorrect ones

takealettermsjones · 02/05/2024 12:19

It should be:

In the forest, the wolves' howls echoed as the trees' branches swayed in the wind. Underground, in the foxes' home, they huddled together to get warm. In the trees, the squirrels' feet pattered as they scrambled up and down the branches looking for food.

Assuming there are several wolves, trees, foxes and squirrels. If any of these are singular then it changes.

ThatEdgyHedgehog · 02/05/2024 12:19

According to Twinkl, that is correct. Can you correct it for me please?

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MarmitePizza · 02/05/2024 12:20

KittyCollar · 02/05/2024 12:18

The only correct apostrophe is the one after foxes

and wolves’ and trees’

pentagonisapentagon · 02/05/2024 12:20

can you give the original task? It’s actually quite confusing to understand.

FourOfDiamonds · 02/05/2024 12:20

I'm not 100% sure but this is my attempt:

In the forest, the wolves' howls echoed as the trees' branches swayed in the wind. Underground, in the foxes' home, they huddled together to get warm. In the trees, the squirrels' feet pattered as they scrambled up and down the branches looking for food.

AGlinnerOfHope · 02/05/2024 12:21

No, lots are right, lots are wrong.

It’s possession. So rephrase each one as being the x of the y.

The howls of the wolves- so wolves’ howls.
The howls belong to the wolves.

The branches of the trees- Trees’ branches.

It’s not the trees belonging to the branches, it’s the branches belonging to the trees.

Does that help?

VickyEadieofThigh · 02/05/2024 12:21

KittyCollar · 02/05/2024 12:18

The only correct apostrophe is the one after foxes

You're wrong. For example, wolves' is correct (because it's possessive, referring to the howls OF the wolves). There are other correct ones (other possessive apostrophes) and some incorrect ones.

Sudokufreak · 02/05/2024 12:22

Sentence 1 branches and howls should not have apostrophes. Sentence 2 - looks OK. Sentence 3 -no apostrophe in trees, squirrels', and no apostrophe in branches.

ThatEdgyHedgehog · 02/05/2024 12:22

So many responses, thank you

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ThatEdgyHedgehog · 02/05/2024 12:23

Okay so I do understand it. The answer booklet (that I found online) had the sentence punctuated as in my OP.

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VickyEadieofThigh · 02/05/2024 12:23

takealettermsjones · 02/05/2024 12:19

It should be:

In the forest, the wolves' howls echoed as the trees' branches swayed in the wind. Underground, in the foxes' home, they huddled together to get warm. In the trees, the squirrels' feet pattered as they scrambled up and down the branches looking for food.

Assuming there are several wolves, trees, foxes and squirrels. If any of these are singular then it changes.

This is correct.

MarmitePizza · 02/05/2024 12:24

Sudokufreak · 02/05/2024 12:22

Sentence 1 branches and howls should not have apostrophes. Sentence 2 - looks OK. Sentence 3 -no apostrophe in trees, squirrels', and no apostrophe in branches.

Edited

Squirrels should have an apostrophe but it should be after the s, not before.

curlywurlymum · 02/05/2024 12:24

ThatEdgyHedgehog · 02/05/2024 12:23

Okay so I do understand it. The answer booklet (that I found online) had the sentence punctuated as in my OP.

This is the correction from Twinkl

To not understand this homework! Please help!
ThatEdgyHedgehog · 02/05/2024 12:25

Thank you! I spent ages last night trying to work that out.

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User478 · 02/05/2024 12:25

Here's the answers that Twinkl have on their worksheet.

To not understand this homework! Please help!
StasisMom · 02/05/2024 12:25

Howls, branches and trees shouldn't have an apostrophe as they are not in possession of anything.