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AIBU?

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English Language GCSE

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m00rfarm · 21/06/2023 18:06

I am looking at some sample papers. I consider myself to be more than adequate at both comprehension and grammar. Can you tell me what you understand from the question relating to this text. What would you put as the answer. It should only take a minute to read the text and answer. My AIBU is that I think this is a really badly worded question and I probably would have answered incorrectly.

"Inside the ship, there were noises. Deep structural groans. I stumbled and fell. No harm done. I got 2 up. With the help of the handrails I went down the stairwell four steps at a time. I had gone down 3 just one level when I saw water. Lots of water. It was blocking my way. It was surging from below 4 like a riotous crowd, raging, frothing and boiling. Stairs vanished into watery darkness. I couldn't 5 believe my eyes. What was this water doing here? Where had it come from? I stood nailed to the 6 spot, frightened and incredulous and ignorant of what I should do next. Down there was where 7 my family was. 8 I ran up the stairs. I got to the main deck. The weather wasn't entertaining any more. I was very 9 afraid. Now it was plain and obvious: the ship was listing badly. And it wasn't level the other way 10 either. There was a noticeable incline going from bow to stern. I looked overboard. The water 11 didn't look to be eighty feet away. The ship was sinking. My mind could hardly conceive it. It was 12 as unbelievable as the moon catching fire. "

Question :
Q1. Read the above paragraphs. List four things from this part of the text about the ship.

OP posts:
JudgeJ · 22/06/2023 14:55

TeenDivided · 22/06/2023 10:53

Tell me about it!
DD often misses the 'explain your answer' marks because she goes round the houses without being clear.

It's so sad that as a marker you know that if that pupil were standing in front of you they'd know the answer! One of my final lessons before the exams season started was always 'How to lose marks', trying to make sure that they didn't lose marks despite knowing how to do it, often by not explaining in the right terms.

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