To ask German speakers to help?

[Florence1960]

I need help translating a couple of bits of German - just one or two sentences which I am struggling to put into good English. Please can anyone help?

Good evening, I have logged on to the main site and managed to pm a couple of people but I don’t want to presume 🤗
I have the final paragraph and my current translation, if anyone can help I would be sooo grateful!