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To suggest a thread written only in Iambic Pentameter?

71 replies

ethelfleda · 24/02/2020 20:32

If you think I know how it works, you’re wrong

(I don’t know if that counts, does it?)

OP posts:
ClashCityRocker · 24/02/2020 20:37

To be or not to be, that is the question...

I don't really get it. I think it's something to do with the beat of the words.

I just know Shakespeare and Marlowe both used a lot, so if you're talking about them, it's a good one to chuck in.

FlibbertyGiblets · 24/02/2020 20:38

Hmmm YABU
Haiku however - yes please
Thankyouverymuch.

AlmostAlwyn · 24/02/2020 20:41

My kind of thread! I'd say I'm in!

Though those above have so far lost the game Grin

picklemewalnuts · 24/02/2020 20:42

De da, de da, de da, de da, de da.

Grin
Cinammoncake · 24/02/2020 20:43

I reckon you've a really good idea
Replies may be quite boring though I fear

TheLarkDescending · 24/02/2020 20:45

I think that sounds an awf’lly good idea
Though using it in practice might be hard

BoudoirPink · 24/02/2020 20:46

An iamb is a unit of poetic meter consisting of an unstressed syllable followed by a stressed one eg da-DUM. The word ‘above’ is an iamb.

Iambic pentameter is five iambic ‘feet’ strung together in a line of verse

da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM da-DUM Da-DUM

Eg Keats’
When I do count the clock that tells the time

is a totally regular iambic pentameter line. But you can play around with variants,

BoudoirPink · 24/02/2020 20:48

I really want my wine but it’s too far
And all I’ve got is biscuits in a jar

TheMustressMhor · 24/02/2020 20:49

I can't begin to write a verse like this.

mantarays · 24/02/2020 20:49

There’s no way I can keep that up for long.

mantarays · 24/02/2020 20:50

It’s like you asked me to revert to song.

ThePants999 · 24/02/2020 20:50

I think you'll fail, though tis a fine approach...

Sinuhe · 24/02/2020 20:50

That calls upon us, by the grace of Grace,
We will perform in measure, time and place. (I think)

mantarays · 24/02/2020 20:50

And now confusion turns my mind to mush.

mantarays · 24/02/2020 20:51

The fall from grace involved a mighty push.

HelgaHere1 · 24/02/2020 20:52

I really want my wine but it’s too far
And all I’ve got is biscuits in a jar

But biscuits make my belly look too fat
I'll settle for a cuddle with my cat

picklemewalnuts · 24/02/2020 20:53

There's not a lot to say that fits the bill.

One wonders how the poet said so much,
With such expression and dramatic flair.

Indeed the plots alone defy belief,
With true complexity and character.

stealthbanana · 24/02/2020 20:54

This is a most fine way to start a thread
But those who cannot play might be displeased

ClashCityRocker · 24/02/2020 20:54

So.... Is

What is this life if full of care
We have no time to stand and stare

Iambic pentametre?

ThisHereMamaBear · 24/02/2020 20:55

Can someone please explain this all to me?

ThisHereMamaBear · 24/02/2020 20:57

Am I for real or was i just lucky?

stealthbanana · 24/02/2020 20:57

@ClashCityRocker

I fear your rhyme is but a mere quadrameter
Because it has but 4 feet in the run of it
(Alas I could not make this verse scan right)

mantarays · 24/02/2020 20:57

Clash

Iambic tetrameter

Piglet89 · 24/02/2020 20:58

So many nights awake in bed I’ve lain
While listening to the patter of the rain
But from the next door room, there’s not a peep
My child just hugs his cuddly - fast asleep.

picklemewalnuts · 24/02/2020 20:58

Alternate syllables are stressed so famously

The quality of mercy is not strained
"The QUAlitY of MERcy IS not STRAIN'D" where capital syllables are emphasised and lower case syllables are unstressed.

HAppy rather than haPPY.

Do you see what I mean?

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