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To ask you does the following sentence make sense to you?

28 replies

MrsMushroom · 12/03/2013 22:23

"How an estate agent adds value when you are buying a home?"

Does that sentence make sense to you??

Does it cast Estate agents in a positive light?

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Alliwantisaroomsomewhere · 12/03/2013 22:28

YABU to ask.

slambang · 12/03/2013 22:30

It's not a sentence so doesn't make sense alone.

slambang · 12/03/2013 22:31

Nor is it a question so why the question mark?

PureQuintessence · 12/03/2013 22:32

eh?

Come again? Where is the rest of the sentence or the missing words?

nevergoogle · 12/03/2013 22:32

How does an estate agent add value when you are buying a home?

maybe?

floweryblue · 12/03/2013 22:33

Surely that's a title for a 'bullet point'.

CookieLady · 12/03/2013 22:34

OP, which estate agency brochure is that from? It's awful.

MrsMushroom · 12/03/2013 22:35

Lol. You're on the right lines Flowery and Cookie. But sorry...the question mark shouldn't be there...discount it please.

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DontCallMeBaby · 12/03/2013 22:38

Is the ? part of the sentence? If so, it should be "How does an estate agent add value when you are buying a home?" like nevergoogle suggests.

Or is it:

How an estate agent adds value when you are buying a home:

  • by pointing out that the curtains are nice
  • by arriving in a a zippy Mini

It doesn't make logical sense though, even when made to make grammatical sense - to me, an estate agent should add some sort of convenience when you're BUYING, and value when you're SELLING.

You'll note the use of the word 'should' ...

Permanentlyexhausted · 12/03/2013 22:38

I'm not sure I understand what you're getting at.

It is neither a complete sentence nor a question. But it is out of context so it is difficult to know whether it makes sense or not. To me it loks like a title above a list of points with a question mark inserted incorrectly at the end.

To ask in what sort of light it casts estate agents is a strange question. Is it the illiterate sentence you are considering or sentiment within it?

MrsMushroom · 12/03/2013 22:38

That;s what I thought Baby. It's terrible isn't it!

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Hassled · 12/03/2013 22:39

An estate agent doesn't add value. The estate agent values the house, and then using the competence/ability that they have, sells it for that value.

AuntieStella · 12/03/2013 22:41

It translates into plain English as: "Why it's worth using an estate agent".

I would see 'adds value' as currently fashionable management speak, rather than an attempt to link the concepts of 'estate agent' and 'valuable'.

Redbindy · 12/03/2013 22:42

Hassled - I love your optimism.

MrsMushroom · 12/03/2013 22:44

Stella...you're right. Is see now...it's a badly worded piece of bollocks though isn't it?

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Hassled · 12/03/2013 22:46

:o Yes, as soon as I clicked "post" I thought "you naive fool - has that really been your experience?"

Permanentlyexhausted · 12/03/2013 22:47

Added Value is simply something that goes above and beyond normal expectations and can apply to a service. So if that title was followed by

  • Providing complimentary transport to and from viewings

for example, it would be quite possible for an estate agent to add value when you are buying a home.

They are simply using the word 'value' outside its narrow economic meaning.

BonaDrag · 12/03/2013 22:50

So are they saying an estate agent will cost a buyer more?

Sounds about right to me....

DeepRedBetty · 12/03/2013 22:51

It's a subject heading not a sentence.

DP and I have been looking at Year 9 options booklet tonight. Dear God. Business Studies, Environmental Science and Classical Studies have already been ruled out by him on grounds of grammatical and spelling incompetence.

DontCallMeBaby · 12/03/2013 23:00

I think I've concluded they are TRYING to 'use the word "value" outside its narrow economic meaning', but instead producing 'a badly worded piece of bollocks'.

There. Have I added any value? Grin

oldnewmummy · 12/03/2013 23:04

Once you've re-written it, shouldn't it be in relation to selling a house?

maddening · 12/03/2013 23:10

Where does the quote come from?

UnrequitedSkink · 12/03/2013 23:13

Can't you just say 'Why you need an estate agent when buying a home' ?

UnrequitedSkink · 12/03/2013 23:13

Or 'How an estate agent helps when buying a home'

mollymawk · 12/03/2013 23:18

I agree that "adding value" is being used here in its management-speak sense of "doing something useful". Which still means it's complete rubbish.

(DontCallMeBaby you have made me laugh out loud twice!)

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