Getting creative this evening! Any feedback on my poem much appreciated !

[Sylviapissed]

Hey guys!
I've always fancied myself as abit if a poet, and so seeing my daughter start her gcses and begin studying poetry, inspired me to take it up again ...

Only a had time to write a quick one, with a few wines for courage.. just wondering what you guys think, any feedback appreciated x

My blonde bob

My blonde bob
Is not my job
It is your job
Hairdresser

My child care
Is not my faire
It is your care
child carer

My broken pipes
Are not my gripes
They are your gripes
Plummer

My home life
Is not my strife
It is your strife
Home wrecker

His erectile dysfunction
Is not my problem
Anymore

It made me smile . So I had a reaction which is good. And Bravo for (wine enabled) embracing it xx

You might want to read this thread again in the morning when you’ve sobered up a bit

Well it’s interesting enough to read to the end.
My suggestions would be to run it through a spell check and be more definitive about your theme and be sure about what it is you want to say.
Best of luck.

But that would be like watching phone footage from the night before. No one needs that in their life. (Thank God I'm too old to have to overly worry about that- if my worst moments were filmed my life would be very different. As probably most of us) xx

I like to write
Late at night

After some wine
But now it’s bedtime

Some spelling mistakes
But is it quite late

In the morning
I’ll be yawning

I’ll be re-reading
Pain in my head I’ll be feeling

I've read worse. It made me chuckle, the basic theme is good. But it needs a spell check.

Would be good at a performance poetry festival event !!

I liked it. Funny and tongue in cheek like Wendy Cope.

I liked it. Funny and tongue in cheek like Wendy Cope.

Made me smile too!

Provided you were just being humorous and didn't think this was actually poetry, all good.