DS has written a personal statement for a university course he'd like to do. (Applications are outside UCAS). He's asked me to check it and TBH I expected to do a bit of "polishing"
It's really very good. It's very personal to his own experiences, but it doesn't sound like him. The vocabulary is very flamboyant and this is a boy who had a private tutor to get a 4 at English GCSE (he got very high grades in maths and science, but not in written subjects).
Anyway, I thought it's better I discover it's a cut and paste job than they do. (If it is).