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sentence opener

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Serena1977 · 20/11/2021 16:15

Can I have a suggestion for a sentence opener for this sentence please

_ he could buy a new game, Bill asked for some money.

OP posts:
NovemberNovemberDarkNights · 20/11/2021 16:18

Is there absolutely no context?

Hoping
Wishing
Thinking

supremelybaffled · 20/11/2021 16:21

So...

That isn't ideal though, and I'd go with:

'Bill asked for some money so he could buy a new game.'

FourEyesGood · 20/11/2021 16:21

So

MrsTerryPratchett · 20/11/2021 16:23

I didn't know how much people hated 'so' as a sentence opener until MN. People properly become murderous. Terrifying grammar weirdos.

Serena1977 · 20/11/2021 16:24

thank you all!

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TeenMinusTests · 20/11/2021 16:25

I'd go with 'Hoping' or similar.

DD had an acronym for sentence starters for GCSE and I'm pretty sure this was one of them.

supremelybaffled · 20/11/2021 16:27

@MrsTerryPratchett In the olden days, we was taught that it ain't right to start a sentence with a conjunction, innit?

NellietheNumpty · 20/11/2021 16:29

Notwithstanding

MrsTerryPratchett · 20/11/2021 16:30

In the olden days, we was taught that it ain't right to start a sentence with a conjunction, innit?

But (see what I did there Grin) it's always right to end with 'innit', innit? I love a good innit. I'm assuming you're from my old manor.

SiobhanSharpe · 20/11/2021 16:30

[quote supremelybaffled]@MrsTerryPratchett In the olden days, we was taught that it ain't right to start a sentence with a conjunction, innit?[/quote]
But that really doesn't apply these days, except perhaps in formal business or legal letters. (See what I did there?) 😉
In creative writing or exchanges between friends it matters not a jot.

SiobhanSharpe · 20/11/2021 16:31

And a cross post too. Jeez.

prettyprinceofpartiez · 20/11/2021 16:32

Before he could buy a new game...

In order that he could buy a new game...

MrsTerryPratchett · 20/11/2021 16:33

@SiobhanSharpe

And a cross post too. Jeez.
So I'm fine with that. But maybe I shouldn't be. And it's fairly common now. Grin
Babdoc · 20/11/2021 16:37

It’s an unnecessarily complicated construction to put the sentence that way round, OP. It is simpler, more logical and more easily understood by a non native speaker, to say: “Billy asked for some money to buy a game.”

SiobhanSharpe · 20/11/2021 16:50

MrsTP 😉😄

CallmeHendricks · 20/11/2021 16:52

I think that to start this particular sentence with 'so' is different from the 'so' that people object to. In this context it would mean "so that..."

doodlejump1980 · 20/11/2021 16:55

Perhaps?

SiobhanSharpe · 20/11/2021 16:57

Babdoc agreed -- it's also a much weaker sentence construction, unless the writer has a particular point to make or explain.
Even then it would be crying out for an edit.

Clarkey86 · 20/11/2021 17:01

“So that”. It’s a subordinating conjunction, which can be moved to the beginning of a sentence. It’s showing purpose.

“So” sometimes replaces “so that” and works the same way.

Sometimes “so” is a coordinating conjunction explaining the result and therefore cannot be moved and doesn’t make sense at the beginning.

It’s really subtle and quite complex though.

Clarkey86 · 20/11/2021 17:09

I’ve thought of an example when it’s coordinating (explaining result instead of purpose)

It rained so I put my umbrella up.
So I put my umbrella up, it rained. (Doesn’t work as it’s not functioning as a subordinate clause)

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