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Overseasmom100 · 20/02/2021 10:22

So it is : or ; for a list of things

So I went out and bought; oranges, pears, apples, strawberries, kiwi fruits

OR

So I went out and bought: oranges, pears, apples, strawberries, kiwi fruits

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dementedpixie · 20/02/2021 10:24

So you need either of them in that sentence?

LApprentiSorcier · 20/02/2021 10:25

It's :

A colon precedes a list of items. A semi-colon is used to separate clauses in a sentence.

AccidentallyOnPurpose · 20/02/2021 10:25

: before a list.

NeverDropYourMoonCup · 20/02/2021 10:26

It should be '[whatever happened], so I went out and bought Oranges, Pears, Apples, Strawberries and Kiwi Fruit.'

Overseasmom100 · 20/02/2021 10:27

fab thank you that explains it really well Accidentally

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NeverDropYourMoonCup · 20/02/2021 10:28

@NeverDropYourMoonCup

It should be '[whatever happened], so I went out and bought Oranges, Pears, Apples, Strawberries and Kiwi Fruit.'
I'll try that again (if the coding screws up a second time, I'm giving up for somebody else to do it.

[whatever happened], so I went out and bought Oranges, Pears, Apples, Strawberries and Kiwi Fruit.'

PenisBeakerIsMyFavouriteMuppet · 20/02/2021 10:28

@NeverDropYourMoonCup

It should be '[whatever happened], so I went out and bought Oranges, Pears, Apples, Strawberries and Kiwi Fruit.'
There’s no need for fruits to have capital letters, they’re not proper nouns.
KingscoteStaff · 20/02/2021 10:29

Actually, both are wrong, as (strictly) you need a complete clause before the colon.

I went out and bought a variety of fruit: oranges, apples, pears, bananas and a stunt pineapple.

dementedpixie · 20/02/2021 10:31

I don't think the original sentence needed a : or ; so you'd need to change it as a pp said in order to fit one in

Howshouldibehave · 20/02/2021 10:32

You can use a colon before the list, but you don’t really need to. Fruit names definitely don’t need capital letters, though!

Try pedants’ corner, OP.

WhatMattersMost · 20/02/2021 10:32

Yes to @AccidentallyOnPurpose.

I generally see a semicolon (i.e. ";") as a 'harder' comma.

DietrichandDiMaggio · 20/02/2021 10:39

@KingscoteStaff

Actually, both are wrong, as (strictly) you need a complete clause before the colon.

I went out and bought a variety of fruit: oranges, apples, pears, bananas and a stunt pineapple.

Yes, this is correct; whatever comes before the colon has to make sense on its own.
AccidentallyOnPurpose · 20/02/2021 10:45

PP's are right though that in that sentence there's no need for : and it's actually incorrect.

However if the example was just a random one to differentiate between use of : and ; then : before a list is an ok rule to remember them by.

DietrichandDiMaggio · 20/02/2021 10:48

@WhatMattersMost

Yes to *@AccidentallyOnPurpose*.

I generally see a semicolon (i.e. ";") as a 'harder' comma.

If anything, I would say it's more like a 'softer' full stop.

Semi-colons can sometimes be used where you would use a full stop, but people often use commas incorrectly and put them where it should be a full stop, or a semi-colon.

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