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Would anyone be able to recommend me their favourite poem?

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Purplturpl · 15/01/2025 21:09

Particularly if it evokes strong emotions. I want to convince my teenager poetry can be amazing

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Tittat50 · 15/01/2025 22:11

@Mmmkaay oh I love that. I have never seen that adaptation before.

I think that version is brilliant and that's the one for say 25year old and unders.

When reality starts to dawn, we can expose them to the truth and hand them Larkin's original 🤷‍♀️🤣

Cheepcheepcheep · 15/01/2025 22:12

Echobelly · 15/01/2025 21:36

The Orange, by Wendy Cope

At lunchtime I bought a huge orange—
The size of it made us all laugh.
I peeled it and shared it with Robert and Dave—
They got quarters and I had a half.

And that orange, it made me so happy,
As ordinary things often do
Just lately. The shopping. A walk in the park.
This is peace and contentment. It’s new.

The rest of the day was quite easy.
I did all the jobs on my list
And enjoyed them and had some time over.
I love you. I’m glad I exist.

This was what I was going to say. It was the poem I read the day I realised my postnatal depression had lifted

Inastatus · 15/01/2025 22:16

Wilfred Owen ‘Anthem for Doomed Youth’ had a profound effect on me as a teenager.

Tipster100 · 15/01/2025 22:16

The King's Breakfast by AA Milne. Not exactly high brow but I love it - we have the nations favourite poems on CD and used to listen to them all in the car. I recommend the book for your son.

StellaOlivetti · 15/01/2025 22:17

What a lovely thread.
i haven’t read any poetry for ages but some of these are beautiful.
I love: Dover Beach (especially the last stanza), You’re by Sylvia Plath and Trees by Joyce Kilmer.

Catapaulting · 15/01/2025 22:18

Diversion · 15/01/2025 21:42

One of my favourites, but perhaps too deep and adult for a 14 year old!

Death Asked Me to Join Him for Dinner

Death asked me to join him for dinner
so I slipped into my favorite black dress
that I had been saving for a special occasion
and let him walk me to our candlelit tryst.
He ordered a ribeye, extra rare
I ordered two desserts and red wine
and then I sipped
and wondered
why he looked so familiar
and smelled like earth and memory.
He felt like a place both faraway
and deep within my body
A place that whispers to me
on the crisp autumn breeze
along the liminal edges of dusk and dawn
somewhere between dancing
and stillness.
He looked at me
with the endless night sky in his eyes
and asked
‘Did you live your life, my love?’
As I swirled my wine in its glass
I wondered If I understood the thread I wove into the greater fabric
If I loved in a way that was deep and freeing
If I let pain and grief carve me into something more grateful
If I made enough space to be in awe that flowers exist
and take the time to watch the honeybees
drink their sweet nectar
I wondered what the riddles of regret and longing
had taught me
and if I realized just how
beautiful and insignificant and monstrous and small we are
for the brief moment that we are here
before we all melt back down
into ancestors of the land.
Death watched me lick buttercream from my fingers
As he leaned in close and said
‘My darling, it’s time.’
So I slipped my hand into his
as he slowly walked me home.
I took a deep breath as he leaned in close
for the long kiss goodnight
and I felt a soft laugh leave my lips
as his mouth met mine
because I never could resist a man
with the lust for my soul in his eyes
and a kiss that makes my heart stop.
~ Gina Puorro:

Oh I Wish I'd Looked After Me Teeth - Pam Ayres - More suitable for age 14 and has always made me laugh.

Warning (When I am old I shall wear purple) - Jenny Joseph

Oh my goodness, the death one is amazing

Ellmau · 15/01/2025 22:21

Pet was never mourned as you,
Purrer of the spotless hue,
Plumy tail, and wistful gaze
While you humoured our queer ways,
Or outshrilled your morning call
Up the stairs and through the hall -
Foot suspended in its fall -
While, expectant, you would stand
Arched, to meet the stroking hand;
Till your way you chose to wend
Yonder, to your tragic end.

Never another pet for me!
Let your place all vacant be;
Better blankness day by day
Than companion torn away.
Better bid his memory fade,
Better blot each mark he made,
Selfishly escape distress
By contrived forgetfulness,
Than preserve his prints to make
Every morn and eve an ache.

From the chair whereon he sat
Sweep his fur, nor wince thereat;
Rake his little pathways out
Mid the bushes roundabout;
Smooth away his talons’ mark
From the claw-worn pine-tree bark,
Where he climbed as dusk embrowned,
Waiting us who loitered round.

Strange it is this speechless thing,
Subject to our mastering,
Subject for his life and food
To our gift, and time, and mood;
Timid pensioner of us Powers,
His existence ruled by ours,
Should - by crossing at a breath
Into safe and shielded death,
By the merely taking hence
Of his insignificance -
Loom as largened to the sense,
Shape as part, above man’s will,
Of the Imperturbable.

As a prisoner, flight debarred,
Exercising in a yard,
Still retain I, troubled, shaken,
Mean estate, by him forsaken;
And this home, which scarcely took
Impress from his little look,
By his faring to the Dim
Grows all eloquent of him.

Housemate, I can think you still
Bounding to the window-sill,
Over which I vaguely see
Your small mound beneath the tree,
Showing in the autumn shade
That you moulder where you played.

Thomas Hardy.

ThatshallotBaby · 15/01/2025 22:21

I’m not sure for a teenage boy, but Blake’s Auguries of Innocence is sublime
To see a World in a Grain of Sand
And Heaven in a Wild Flower
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour

It goes on. It’s very moving.

ThePoshUns · 15/01/2025 22:21

Maya Angelou - Still I Rise

ThePoshUns · 15/01/2025 22:22
AllProperTeaIsTheft · 15/01/2025 22:22

Parratha · 15/01/2025 21:46

First of all if you want your child to enjoy language/poetry then please realise that your opening question "would anyone be able to recommend me their favourite poem" is utterly, utterly incorrect english. You can not recommend yourself ("me") in that way.

This is a big bugbear of mine but I see it regularly on MN.

Would you say the same about 'give me your favourite poem' or 'send me your favourite poem'? The pronoun 'me' can be used as an indirect object, not just a direct object. After all, you are not 'sending yourself' or 'giving yourself' in those other examples, are you?

WhatwouldRuthdo · 15/01/2025 22:24

Another Wilfred Owen one, but Strange Meeting is powerful and accessible.

Also accessible, as mentioned by a previous poster, is Benjamin Zephaniah. For light hearted, try Talking Turkeys.

Wigtopia · 15/01/2025 22:24

Goblin market by Christina Rossetti. I remember being blown away by it at about 12 or 13. It started off joyful and carefree, got a little scary and then terrifying. Might be dark for some but I still love it

Delphigirl · 15/01/2025 22:25

I carry your heart with me

i carry your heart with me (i carry it in
my heart) i am never without it (anywhere
i go you go, my dear; and whatever is done
by only me is your doing, my darling)
i fear
no fate (for you are my fate, my sweet) i want
no world (for beautiful you are my world, my true)
and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
and whatever a sun will always sing is you

here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows
higher than soul can hope or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart

i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)

e.e.cummings

Inastatus · 15/01/2025 22:26

yummytummy · 15/01/2025 21:49

This one is more probably for you than for him but it's one of my favourites

Flight of the Firstborn - Peggy Carr

He streaks past his sixteenth year,
small island life stretched tight
across his shoulders
his strides rehearsing city blocks
college brochures
airline schedules
stream excitedly through his
newly competent hands
his goodbyes blurred like neon
on a morning suddenly gone wet

I'm left stranded
on a tiny patch of time
still reaching
to wipe the cereal from his smile.

@yummytummy I love this 🥹

DreamTheMoors · 15/01/2025 22:30

”If” by Rudyard Kipling
I tried 3 times to copy it here and failed.
It inspires me.

MrsPeterHarris · 15/01/2025 22:30

Onceuponatimethen · 15/01/2025 22:01

Sad one:

Mid-Term Break by Seamus Heaney

I sat all morning in the college sick bay
Counting bells knelling classes to a close.
At two o'clock our neighbours drove me home.

In the porch I met my father crying—
He had always taken funerals in his stride—
And Big Jim Evans saying it was a hard blow.

The baby cooed and laughed and rocked the pram
When I came in, and I was embarrassed
By old men standing up to shake my hand

And tell me they were 'sorry for my trouble'.
Whispers informed strangers I was the eldest,
Away at school, as my mother held my hand

In hers and coughed out angry tearless sighs.
At ten o'clock the ambulance arrived
With the corpse, stanched and bandaged by the nurses.

Next morning I went up into the room. Snowdrops
And candles soothed the bedside; I saw him
For the first time in six weeks. Paler now,

Wearing a poppy bruise on his left temple,
He lay in the four-foot box as in his cot.
No gaudy scars, the bumper knocked him clear.

A four-foot box, a foot for every year.

I came to say Seamus Heaney also - this one & also Scaffolding.

EdithStourton · 15/01/2025 22:30

Maboscelar · 15/01/2025 21:55

I studied his work for GCSE I think though it might have been A level. I think teens could enjoy it, his language is so evocative.

I was I think 15 when it was pushed in front of me by an adult friend. But I find some out dense even now, though I loved it from the off.

HighlandCowbag · 15/01/2025 22:32

For that age group I'd look at some spoken word poets on YouTube. Toria Garbutt is brill. Or talk about the crossover between rap and poetry. Or how Poetry can be a political act. Or a rebellion.

Poetry is such a personal thing. I'm doing a creative writing MA so read loads but the vast majority of 'normal' Poetry leaves me a bit cold. I like collections that are a hybrid of prose and Poetry. Or poetic memoir.

HPandthelastwish · 15/01/2025 22:33

Chocolate Cake by Michael Rosen
No sleeping by Michael Rosen
Particularly his YouTube of him performing them

I have a soft spot for John Agard and Benjamin Zephaniah who both came to my Primary School. Whilst I'm not a veggie really like Talking Turkeys

Watching it performed by the writer is entirely different to reading it yourself. There is / was a spoken word poetry show on BBC he might like.

Nellodee · 15/01/2025 22:34

I met a traveller from an antique land,
I met a traveller from an antique land,
Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
And on the pedestal, these words appear:
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”
Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;
And on the pedestal, these words appear:
My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings;
Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.”

I think all teenagers have a bit of Ozymandias in them, and like him, need to be brought down to earth.

NeedSomeComfy · 15/01/2025 22:36

Frank O'Hara knocks me for 6 every time I read him. But 14 might be too young (I was about 22 I think when I discovered him).

Theextraordinaryisintheordinary · 15/01/2025 22:37

DrFosterWentToGloucester23 · 15/01/2025 21:48

Simon Armitage is great. His collection of poems inspired by the lives of soldiers (especially those suffering from PTSD), called ‘The Not Dead’, is incredibly powerful. There is a C4 documentary of the same name. That being said, my favourite poet is Wilfred Owen. Some of his poems bring me to tears. As a previous poster said, so many of the soldiers were teenagers. “What passing bells for those who die as cattle …”

Yes! I agree. These are so powerful. You can watch on You Tube. He might like that, poetry with a bit of screen time mixed in.

MissRoseDurward · 15/01/2025 22:39

The boy stood on the burning deck
His body all a quiver
He gave a cough
His leg fell off
And floated down the river..

The boy stood on the burning deck
Whence all but he had fled
The fire had burned his trousers off
And turned his bum quite red.

Don't they still do the War Poets at school? I think I was about fourteen when we did them. We had to choose one to learn. I can still recite mine, many years later - Memorial Tablet, by Siegfried Sassoon.