10 - Girl 4 (January David #1) by Will Carver (audiobook)
Another stinker! Listened all the way through as I was vaguely interested by the killer's motive.
Detective January David investigates a series of gruesome murders. His new wife becomes one of the victims. January learns (conveniently) he is psychic which helps him to solve the mystery.
Lots of hopping around different characters' heads so you never really connect with anyone. Zero chemistry between any characters. Everyone felt 2 dimensional. Main character was dull and no personality.
Very poor writing and story execution.
The psychic thing. Very annoying. Visions occur at convenient times to give clues to January. So he would never have been able to solve it without these which alienates the reader and reduces tension/stakes as we know that his power will help him out at every step of the way. Takes out the guessing 'whodunnit' element for the reader as solving the crime is entirely dependent on these visions.
The way the psychic thing is written. 'What he DOES know'; 'What he DOESN'T know' are recurrent phrases throughout this novel when the writer is narrating the main character trying to piece together what the visions mean.
Other poor writing. So much telling rather than showing - amateur writing. Another reason why it's so hard to connect with the story or characters. The writing is too shallow and written like a series of statements.
Lots of gratuitous sex and VAW scenes. When January sees his wife's bloodied body, he makes time to comment something like 'her toned, succulent legs'. The writer objectifies women - even when they're half-dead - and there's a recurrent theme throughout the book that women shouldn't put themselves in danger e.g. having one night stands.
Definitely won't be continuing with the other books in this series and not tempted to read anything else by this author.
Hoping to finish real book Trainspotting this week! Really enjoying it.