Just finished The Fourteenth Letter by Claire Evans. Oh dear oh dear oh dear. Oh dear. Oh. Dear.
This is risible. Terrible dialogue. Terrible, silly plot. I kid you not , a character escapes death at least 8 times. And it's 1881, and she is a black American on the run , from Arizona and called Savannah...It's like a story my year 10s would write.
Here's a line of dialogue:
'Let Mildred and my aunt go; it's me you want! They have done nothing!'
It claims serious themes such as eugenics and Darwinism, and includes a long historical note at the end.
Savannah is like a Doctor Who assistant : it reads in fact a bit like one of those weird and annoying Dr Who Victorian episodes, crossed with the Da Vinci Code (yes, that bad) crossed with what Phillip Pullman would do if he wrote (badly) for adults.
Still, if you want lots of cliffhangers (at least twice per chapter), unpleasant rape and incest plots and reveals that really aren't very surprising (or revealing) you might enjoy it!
So awful, it's bizarrely good.
Maybe it's me : Amazon reviewers rather like it!
On another note, for those of you who are following my random number generator , Mermaid has come up! At last!!