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A Dad's Poem

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mieow · 02/10/2003 16:23

Her hair was up in a pony tail,
her favourite dress tied with a bow.
Today was Daddy's Day at school,
and she couldn't wait to go.

But her mommy tried to tell her,
that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand,
if she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid;
she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates
of why he wasn't there today.

But still her mother worried,
for her to face this day alone.
And that was why once again,
she tried to keep her daughter home.

But the little girl went to school,
eager to tell them all.
About a dad she never see
a dad who never calls.

There were daddies along the wall in back,
for everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently,
anxious in their seats.

One by one the teacher called,
a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy,
as seconds slowly passed.

At last the teacher called her name,
every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching,
for a man who wasn't there.

"Where's her daddy at?"
she heard a boy call out.
"She probably doesn't have one,"
another student dared to shout.

And from somewhere near the back,
she heard a daddy say,
"Looks like another deadbeat dad,
too busy to waste his day."

The words did not offend her,
as she smiled up at her Mom.
And looked back at her teacher,
who told her to go on.

And with hands behind her back,
slowly she began to speak.
And out from the mouth of a child,
came words incredibly unique.

"My Daddy couldn't be here,
because he lives so far away.
But I know he wishes he could be,
since this is such a special day.
And though you cannot meet him,
I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy,
and how much he loves me so.
He loved to tell me stories
he taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses,
and taught me to fly a kite.
We used to share fudge sundaes,
and ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him,
I'm not standing here alone.
Cause my daddy's always with me,
even though we are apart
I know because he told me,
he'll forever be in my heart"

With that, her little hand reached up,
and lay across her chest.
Feeling her own heartbeat,
beneath her favourite dress.

And from somewhere in the crowd of dads,
her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter,
who was wise beyond her years.

For she stood up for the love
of a man not in her life.
Doing what was best for her,
doing what was right.

And when she dropped her hand back down,
staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft,
but its message clear and loud.

"I love my daddy very much,
he's my shining star.
And if he could, he'd be here,
but heaven's just too far
You see he was a fireman
and died just this past year
When airplanes hit the towers
and taught Americans to fear.
But sometimes when I close my eyes,
it's like he never went away."
And then she closed her eyes,
and saw him there that day.

And to her mother's amazement,
she witnessed with surprise.
A room full of daddies and children,
all starting to close their eyes.

Who knows what they saw before them,
who knows what they felt inside.
Perhaps for merely a second,
they saw him at her side.

"I know you're with me Daddy,"
to the silence she called out.
and what happened next made believers,
of those once filled with doubt.

Not one in that room could explain it,
for each of their eyes had been closed.
But there on the desk beside her,
was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.

And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,
by the love of her shining bright star.
And given the gift of believing,
that heaven is never too far.

They say it takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to appreciate them, a day to love them, but then an entire life to forget them.
Send this phrase to the people you'll never forget. If you don't send it to anyone, it means you're in a hurry and that you've forgotten the best things in life.... your family and your friends. So take the time... to live and love. Until eternity.

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mieow · 02/10/2003 22:00

Its not my poem, just thought that some of you may like it, I was wrong

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bobsmum · 02/10/2003 22:07

Ok folks - so the poem was really cheesy, but I think the sentiment behind Mieow posting it was genuine, so go easy?

ks · 02/10/2003 22:08

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mieow · 02/10/2003 22:10

Thanks Bobsmum

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sunchowder · 02/10/2003 23:06

Mieow
I am glad you shared the poem and I don't think I said a bad word about it(did I?), my friend's husband was at the WTC when it was hit and I spent the entire morning with her running back and forth to the toilet with her crying and screaming, thank god her husband survived, so it is near and dear to me. I also like to have too much fun and I can understand the other side with the cheesy remarks and the coddy remarks so I guess I am a fence jumper with this--I'm sorry if were hurt by any of this.

Blu: I remember Convoy Oh Too well! But those were not the lyrics! I will have the find the song you mean. We had so many over here, how about when "Billie Joe Mcalister dropped off the Tallahassee Bridge"? Here are the lyrics to Convoy:
.W. MCCALL LYRICS
CONVOY LYRICS

[On the CB]
Ah, breaker one-nine, this here's the Rubber Duck. You gotta copy on me, Pig Pen, c'mon? Ah, yeah, 10-4, Pig Pen, fer shure, fer shure. By golly, it's clean clear to Flag Town, c'mon. Yeah, that's a big 10-4 there, Pig Pen, yeah, we definitely got the front door, good buddy. Mercy sakes alive, looks like we got us a convoy...

Was the dark of the moon on the sixth of June
In a Kenworth pullin' logs
Cab-over Pete with a reefer on
And a Jimmy haulin' hogs
We is headin' for bear on I-one-oh
'Bout a mile outta Shaky Town
I says, "Pig Pen, this here's the Rubber Duck.
"And I'm about to put the hammer down."

[Chorus]
'Cause we got a little convoy
Rockin' through the night.
Yeah, we got a little convoy,
Ain't she a beautiful sight?
Come on and join our convoy
Ain't nothin' gonna get in our way.
We gonna roll this truckin' convoy
'Cross the U-S-A.
Convoy!

[On the CB]
Ah, breaker, Pig Pen, this here's the Duck. And, you wanna back off them hogs? Yeah, 10-4, 'bout five mile or so. Ten, roger. Them hogs is gettin' in-tense up here.

By the time we got into Tulsa Town,
We had eighty-five trucks in all.
But they's a roadblock up on the cloverleaf,
And them bears was wall-to-wall.
Yeah, them smokies is thick as bugs on a bumper;
They even had a bear in the air!
I says, "Callin' all trucks, this here's the Duck.
"We about to go a-huntin' bear."

[Chorus]
'Cause we got a great big convoy
Rockin' through the night.
Yeah, we got a great big convoy,
Ain't she a beautiful sight?
Come on and join our convoy
Ain't nothin' gonna get in our way.
We gonna roll this truckin' convoy
'Cross the U-S-A.
Convoy!

[On the CB]
Ah, you wanna give me a 10-9 on that, Pig Pen? Negatory, Pig Pen; you're still too close. Yeah, them hogs is startin' to close up my sinuses. Mercy sakes, you better back off another ten.

Well, we rolled up Interstate 44
Like a rocket sled on rails.
We tore up all of our swindle sheets,
And left 'em settin' on the scales.
By the time we hit that Chi-town,
Them bears was a-gettin' smart:
They'd brought up some reinforcements
From the Illinoise National Guard.
There's armored cars, and tanks, and jeeps,
And rigs of ev'ry size.
Yeah, them chicken coops was full'a bears
And choppers filled the skies.
Well, we shot the line and we went for broke
With a thousand screamin' trucks
An' eleven long-haired Friends a' Jesus
In a chartreuse micra-bus.

[On the CB]
Ah, Rubber Duck to Sodbuster, come over. Yeah, 10-4, Sodbuster? Lissen, you wanna put that micra-bus right behind that suicide jockey? Yeah, he's haulin' dynamite, and he needs all the help he can get.

Well, we laid a strip for the Jersey shore
And prepared to cross the line
I could see the bridge was lined with bears
But I didn't have a dog-goned dime.
I says, "Pig Pen, this here's the Rubber Duck.
"We just ain't a-gonna pay no toll."
So we crashed the gate doing ninety-eight
I says "Let them truckers roll, 10-4."

[Chorus]
'Cause we got a mighty convoy
Rockin' through the night.
Yeah, we got a mighty convoy,
Ain't she a beautiful sight?
Come on and join our convoy
Ain't nothin' gonna get in our way.
We gonna roll this truckin' convoy
'Cross the U-S-A.

Convoy! Ah, 10-4, Pig Pen, what's your twenty?
Convoy! OMAHA? Well, they oughta know what to do with them hogs out there fer shure. Well, mercy
Convoy! sakes, good buddy, we gonna back on outta here, so keep the bugs off your glass and the bears off your...
Convoy! tail. We'll catch you on the flip-flop. This here's the Rubber Duck on the side.
Convoy! We gone. 'Bye,'bye.

JJ · 02/10/2003 23:16

Codswallop,

American crap
on the internet, bollocks.
It's British crap, please.

Dadslib, and how was SoupDragon's haiku, not? Um, can you count? It's not so hard and there are courses.

Mieow, I think anything that makes someone sit back and take notice of what they have is a good thing. Plus, how often do you get people talking about poetry?

sunchowder · 02/10/2003 23:38

Ah JJ: where is soupy's haiku?

Angeliz · 03/10/2003 00:01

well i think that that is a child somewhere. YES it's "cheesy", and "sad", but if a parent dies wherever or when ever ,wouldn't you feel like that..........personally it made me cry, Mieow and was a bit shocked to read all the posts!!!

JJ · 03/10/2003 00:11

Sorry, really, I meant CountessDracula. Me, I'm highly confused. But SoupDragon can make a great haiku, I'm sure. No doubt. It might go something like this?

I'm Soupdragon, hmm
Soup for me, there's no main course
Dragons are afters

sunchowder · 03/10/2003 01:52

Angeliz, I completely agree that it is devastating when a parent dies, I don't know why this thread took such a wild turn and I am just enjoying going with the fun flow. This is not to minimize the seriousness of the poem that Mieow posted. Sorry if I offended anyone. It was a beautiful poem that was posted and it was serious and very sad. I have started another thread on Haiku's so that I personally do not continue to disrespect your thread mieow. Can I be forgiven?

forestfly · 03/10/2003 08:22

Ditto, didnt even read the whole thread so missed your poem, sorry

M2T · 03/10/2003 08:33

Meiow - I liked it.

I hate the rest of you, you are all horrible, heartless, shallow, cold and arrogant (that one's for you dadslib).... apart from Bobsmum.

flounce<

Dadslib - do I really get to 'rip' you until tomorrow!? Now THERE'S an offer you don't get every day!

codswallop · 03/10/2003 09:36

sunchowder I like the "putting hogs out fer sure "bit A LOT!!

WSM · 03/10/2003 09:47

Meiow, personally I cried all over my keyboard. Having lost my step-sister recently to cancer i think it does convey the sadness and bravery of the mother and daughter very well. Yes, it was sentimental but it was a poem about a little girl who lost her Daddy FFS !

M2T · 03/10/2003 09:52

Well said WSM!

Why do people feel the need to slag off something that was meant as a nice sentiment!

Do you people hug your kids or is that too cheesy for you?

Angeliz · 03/10/2003 10:43

glad to see others liked it too and i'm not the one soft one

codswallop · 03/10/2003 10:48

m2t!!!

M2T · 03/10/2003 11:49

Okay perhaps the hugging yer kids comment was a bit harsh.

bran · 03/10/2003 15:35

This poem has bothered me since I first read it. I can see from the comments that some people thought it was very moving, and if even one person was uplifted by it then I guess it has value, but really I found it annoying because it was very manipulative. I don't think it's because I'm lacking in empathy and I think that good poetry (or even just heartfelt poetry) has the power to help understand and empathise with others, eg poetry about WW1. In this case I think the middle section of the poem was very smaltzy, which may be what the others who didn't like it reacted to. After all, in this day and age what school would have a 'bring your father to school day', surely it would be a 'bring your parent/guardian/significant adult to school day'. And what kind of person would make a derogatory comment about another child's parent without knowing any background? And how is it that the teacher and other children in the class didn't know that the girl's father was dead?

Sorry about the rant, it just didn't feel like honest emotion to me.

codswallop · 03/10/2003 15:38

Huzzah

fio2 · 03/10/2003 15:57

bran my dd has a bring your Dad to school day she has a bring your grandparents to school day soon but no-one wants to go with her Im gonna buy myself a grey wig and pretend

ks · 03/10/2003 16:14

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ks · 03/10/2003 16:23

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JJ · 03/10/2003 17:21

ks, your first post reminded me of a favourite of mine at school. This is from a sonnet by Edna St Vincent Millay:

...
I shall remember you with love, or season
My scorn with pity, - let me make it plain:
I find this frenzy insufficient reason
for conversation when we meet again.

(writing of a one night stand)

Excellent! I love the one you gave, too. Pity I didn't know it when it would have been useful.

princesspeahead · 03/10/2003 19:16

ahem.

my claim to fame this evening is that I used to go out with someone who appeared in "Convoy". His father was one of the crew and he has a fleeting appearance on screen as a... ummm... seven (?) year old wearing a stripy t-shirt.

Little known fact - it was directed by sam peckinpah but was so awful he took his name off the credits.

Little known fact 2, it is the onloy film - book - song combo where the SONG came first, then the film, and then they decided to turn it into a book. Which goes some way towards explaining why it is such a shit movie.

However, Ali McGraw rocks. As always.