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From 15 year son: An essay on BREXIT

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Shakespearmint · 17/12/2018 13:16

I wish I could publish it on his behalf !

BREXIT

As George Orwell wrote in the appendix to his book Nineteen Eighty-Four, when one creates an abbreviation for a word of phrase, one turns it into a more fundamental concept, or one takes away the complexity or distinctiveness of its connotations. It becomes as concrete 'as a chair or a table'. Orwell wrote at a time of political extremes, of Comintern and Nazi; we find ourselves at a time of instability and partisanship which, though lesser in both severity and consequence (at least for now), finds the same methods of propaganda used for the same purposes.

Now is the time of the negotiations on Brexit. Now, you must have at some point reflected on this inelegant and rather unnecessary coinage. It is not designed for convenience; we could after all called it the UK's exit [from the EU], or used a similarly unflashy term; such terms are after all used by most pundits and newsreaders. But who can be passionate about the UK's exit? In that case, our leaving the EU would be a purely technical matter, involving a political prospect with many implications; but 'Brexit' is an ideological matter, sometimes even exceeding traditional right vs. left affiliations: it is a concrete event with a singular purpose; in fact, the word Brexit compensates for all that Brexit is not. Brexit just means Brexit.
I am not suggesting that words by themselves have the power to influence the political situation; but they are symptoms of the disease that has. I need not here instil in anyone a sense of the sheer idiocy of the referendum issue - that a 2% difference would only be genuinely meaningful to the extremely superstitious; nor that 'the people', who voted on the basis of what were demonstrably lies, should not be idolised over all facts, knowledge and expertise; nor indeed that one cannot undermine democracy simply by voting. These are things that cannot be argued by reason. But reason doesn't come above hard facts - that is, in the Brexiteers' view, the hard facts of the Will of the People, June 2016, or Brexit, and what I have just recited would have been a political ideal, a date, and a retching sound respectively, in 2015 and before. Thus, now we can see the passion and dogmatism with which some have now been made to pursue the Brexit cause, we can understand the tenacity with which those in power cling to it. They are one and the same: multifaceted issues with complex implications are transformed into a solid facts, insisting that all must bow to them.

Thus this new Brexit deal, as expected, serves Brexit more than it serves Britain. It is outside the EU; but it has nothing to do with the reasons for the Leave vote, save perhaps controls on immigration. For the Leave vote was, irrespective of how it is put into words, about the perceived lack of democracy in the EU. They voted Leave because they believed that the EU was asserting unwanted, unelected power. But now, because of the deal, we are 'rule-takers, not rule-makers'; we previously had MEPs, representatives in Europe, and as for straight bananas, they were very much our own doing. Brexit, once again, is a solemn obligation; all else, including those who voted for it, must submit to it.

The divides, however, have only become greater, possibly because, behind 'the people have spoken', there is the panicked question, particularly among the poorer voters: 'if not Brexit, then what?' What will solve the problems we face? We have as a country vested great hopes in Brexit, to solve social issues, and many will not readily give it up without a clear alternative. The kind of clear alternative that was offered at the 2017 General Election - which detracted attention from Brexit - has not been sustained. And as long as it does not exist there will be no peace from the rallying cries of the Brexiteers, irrational though they are.

I am soon to be one of 'the people', and have no better idea of right and wrong than anyone else. I know, however, how the sides present their arguments; I know that while those who support Leave use rhetoric and cliches, and mock those who disagree, Remainers tend to use facts - facts, that is, from the real world, not self-established superstitions. I do not want the kind of world where truth does not get a look-in, but when political dogmas such as Brexit are established, that world looks unsettlingly close.

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BMW6 · 18/12/2018 13:53

Lol I wonder where he filched that from Grin

BoyMeetsWorld · 18/12/2018 17:43

wow you lot are mean. Could you have done better at 15?

ViragoKnows · 18/12/2018 17:53

This is why it’s not a good idea to post teenagers’ writings in the internet.

brizzledrizzle · 18/12/2018 17:54

I think it's great he's thinking about it, and ignore the posters who are criticising his work. Teenagers can't win, people complain about them hanging around in towns, being on electronic devices all the time and then when they do something like your son has done they criticise that as well.

brizzledrizzle · 18/12/2018 18:01

Out of curiosity, and for the benefit of the PP who asked where he got it from - I ran it through my work plagiarism checker - 91% unique.

ViragoKnows · 18/12/2018 18:01

Teenagers can't win, people complain about them hanging around in towns, being on electronic devices all the time and then when they do something like your son has done they criticise that as well.

What?! What kind of false dichotomy is that?

OP is the one who’s posted it online.

Most of us get through life without posting our teenagers’ work online. There’s not some rule that either your DC are delinquent gamers, OR you have to put their essays, articles, artwork on MN.

brizzledrizzle · 18/12/2018 18:05

Most of us get through life without posting our teenagers’ work online. There’s not some rule that either your DC are delinquent gamers, OR you have to put their essays, articles, artwork on MN.

Did anybody say that there was?

Personally I wouldn't post my teenagers essays online but I have posted artwork they have done on a relevant art forum. I object to the people who are critical without bothering to be constructive rather than downright nasty.

ViragoKnows · 18/12/2018 18:08

Well why did you say

“Teenagers can't win, people complain about them hanging around in towns, being on electronic devices all the time and then when they do something like your son has done they criticise that as well.”

??

It’s irrelevant. Don’t put it online. If you do, some people will pull it apart.

Quietrebel · 18/12/2018 22:16

Those people should pick on someone their own size.

milkandpancakes · 18/12/2018 22:22

It's a really interesting essay actually. Top marks from me! Xmas SmileStar

Loletta · 18/12/2018 23:32

It's very well written and I'd be very proud of him if I were his mum.

bluebell2017 · 18/12/2018 23:43

It's very wordy, but ultimately adds nothing to the debate. Heavy reliance on rhetoric and cliches. Bit ironic, really.

Shakespearmint · 19/12/2018 10:14

Thanks for all the comments .

I am not sure what I was expecting by pasting his work here. I am tremendously proud of his argument and determination . I have no problem with constructive criticism or negative comments. The subject is contentious .It will appear in his school magazine and that will be that .

I understand too that there is BREXIT fatigue.
Thanks again

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lazysummer · 19/12/2018 18:51

I think it's great and I'm an English teacher. We should be relieved that teenagers are taking an interest in politics, as we will need them to rescue us from this mess. You (and he) certainly don't deserve the vitriol that has been dished up on this thread; I wonder what example we are setting as the grownups.
I would also be proud if my son had written this; I am appalled at the derogatory comments, whatever people's viewpoint.

Imissgmichael · 19/12/2018 19:02

Thank goodness 15 year olds can’t vote.

Those last 9-10 sentences are clear that he has little idea. I mean please, leavers mock and remainers use fact. Hasn’t he seen all the insults thrown at leavers - thick, uneducated, racist, to old to vote because they’ll all be dead soon, hope they suffer and can’t get medicine.

But heys that’s ok, he’s only a child and finding his way in life. That’s why they can’t vote.

lazysummer · 19/12/2018 19:13

Whereas the adults say "biased little tit", making them much better informed and measured in their response.

Talkinpeece · 19/12/2018 20:42

Straight Bananas
Hmm
more research needed

missesbiggens · 19/12/2018 21:37

Unfortunately, this is a great example of why verbosity does not = intellect/fact. I will say this though, he'd make a brilliant Guardian Opinion writer.

You should get him to read some of George Orwell's work for a better idea of the context about which he writes.

Dadaist · 01/01/2019 15:13

I disagree that ‘remainers’ traded in lies or that ‘leavers’ were voting with facts.
Leave voters - almost by definition have a very particular perspective if the EU and of the UK that was nurtured over decades and reached its peak in that 1950s and 60s. It’s why older people were more likely to vote for Brexit. They didn’t need facts or economic forecasts as they already had a world view in which a country like the UK can be independent, shape its destiny and influence the rest of the world. Their childhood classrooms had maps of the British Empire with 2/3rds of the globe in red.
Unfortunately the sun did eventually set on the British Empire, this world view was wrong then and laughed at now.
And there is no prospect of standing outside of the influence of global economies. It’s the US or Europe- take your pick.
And yes I’m firmly in the EU camp.
Brexit meaning ‘it’s 1950, we still have and empire, and we’ve just won the war and we don’t need anyone’ was never on the ballot - but the people who were 15 when this was classroom convention voted as if they could turn the clock back.
I salute this 15 year old for his far more challenging perspective. And those critics are leave voters who are ideologically attached to a Brexit world view as defined by the essay! I say well done!

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