Who else should I write to? Somerville (again), McAlpine? Is there a particular committee in charge of this consultation?
The consultation will be done by the Scottish Government - specificially Anne Somervilles department. Individual MSPs don't have a role except possibly asking q's of relevant Ministers
What might be useful is lobbying Somerville about the nature of the consultation - and getting the government to encourage organisations providing services to women to consult with service users and providers before responding.
The last time round a lot of organisations - Women's Aid, Zero Tolerance Rape Crisis etc - seemed to send in TRA supporting statements, with no internal discussion (that anyone was aware of anyway).
The idea that their is a connection between them knowing - and providing - the opinion the Scottish Government wanted and their dependency on grants from the Scottish Government is a difficult one to shake .. Some pressure on Shirley Anne S to try and dispel that wouldn't be a bad thing.