The only thing I would like to have seen her done is to have a bit more of what people call the common touch.
So trying to get the general public to relate to what she was saying, rather than people who already understand feminism 101.
Maybe even use a few sensationalist examples that would strike a chord. Like the transman raped in the taxi, for instance.
Many people need a lightbulb moment.
I think she said everything she could possibly say, but I would have stuck the odd Daily Mail headline in it.