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GCSE English Literature Contrast Poetry..DD on the edge please help!

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woesofme · 07/05/2023 11:42

She’s doing Edexcel Conflict Poetry and just had her first breakdown. Says she can’t remember quotes for all 15 poems as well as the quotes for the 3 plays she’s doing. I really don’t know how to help her but could really do some advice as I don’t want her losing the plot this close to the exams.

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OutDamnedSpot · 18/05/2023 22:57

Yes @Proudcarerr. The grid will be something the teacher has created to help with revision, but there’s a line in the mark scheme that says something like “credit all valid interpretations” (or similar). Basically, so long as the pupil can support their ideas (e.g. with a quotation or well reasoned argument) their answer is ‘correct’.

Proudcarerr · 18/05/2023 20:52

Can I ask a question please.. we have a grid with the different poem themes. If there's a comparison question and the student picks a theme that isn't the same 'in the grid' but manages to intemperate it in their own way to fit the theme does that count?

SheilaFentiman · 11/05/2023 22:50

Ugh, DS1 has the same issue, bookmarking!

clary · 11/05/2023 21:36

Poppy802 · 11/05/2023 20:44

I asked my ds teacher and the exam could feature ANY of the 15 poems so they need to know them all I was told. I think they actually select one of the poems for them to compare to anothet poem not ask them to pick their own from the 15 poems. That's what I believe but can someone come along and confirm?

The poem set in the exam is given to the student tho so they don't need to learn that one IYSWIM (obvs need to be able to discuss it but the text is there). They need a range depending on the theme of the set poem, hence learning 5-6 of them.

Poppy802 · 11/05/2023 20:45

I just think it's really really hard for these students. 15 is far too many.

Poppy802 · 11/05/2023 20:44

doglover90 · 07/05/2023 12:37

Focus on learning 5 or 6 poems really well, so you can compare them to whatever comes up in the exam - ideally you'll have a good spread of different 'themes' eg war, nature. Learn 4 or 5 quotes from each of those poems. They can be short eg one or two words. You can also analyse the titles of the poems in the exam.

I asked my ds teacher and the exam could feature ANY of the 15 poems so they need to know them all I was told. I think they actually select one of the poems for them to compare to anothet poem not ask them to pick their own from the 15 poems. That's what I believe but can someone come along and confirm?

lilsupersparks · 09/05/2023 21:58

To add to this - I’m guessing that this is for an exam on Wednesday and after that she can forget the lot!!

good luck to her - sounds like a diligent student ❤️

LolaSmiles · 09/05/2023 21:54

I've often reminded students that quotations can be single words and marks are awarded for references as well as quotations (certainly for AQA and I think Edexcel is similar).

When my students are struggling I encourage them to learn a couple of key words/phrases and the big idea for the poems. If they can talk about themes and ideas then they will pick marks up still.

PianoLeGrande · 09/05/2023 21:08

@woesofme if she just reads the poems once every day how long do you think it would take her? Ds read his from the revision guide so whilst he is reading them all the different highlighted bits are there to be seen and hopefully absorbed into his brain. It doesn't take as long at all. Get her to read them aloud too, it helps with it sticking.

She will know more than she thinks, she doesn't need to learn them off by heart, just bits she can quote out, not full quotes just a few words to detail her point. Ds just worked on the ones that covered the most themes.

This is normal full blown panic mode, most children go through it at some point with maybe every subject or just a couple. Remind her this will all be over very soon, no one will ever ask her again to compare poems. Ds felt that kept him very motivated Grin

OutDamnedSpot · 09/05/2023 13:24

They’re closed book again now @TollgateDebs

In some ways it’s better - we no longer have to watch pupils read the book in their exams, but it definitely piles the pressure on.

TollgateDebs · 09/05/2023 11:08

My exams were from the closed book days, so (like another poster) I made a song up of the quotes and tried to remember that! It worked well enough to get me through.

Poppy802 · 09/05/2023 11:05

NillyNoMates · 07/05/2023 12:53

Quotes need only be one word. Also, it doesn’t matter if she uses a quote and gets it slightly wrong. I’m a teacher and exam marker.

I was wondering this.
I said to my son does it matter if you get the quote slightly wrong and he said he thought they had to be exact

Poppy802 · 09/05/2023 11:04

Bobbybobbins · 08/05/2023 08:51

I'm a secondary English teacher and I agree with the above - choose a smaller number of poems to know really well (6-8) can work. It's so rubbish that the whole thing is closed book, ridiculous memory test.

Totally agree. When I did it back in the late 90s I believe we had to learn about 6?
Anyway I learnt them off by heart but I really didn't understand them I was just good at reciting them.

Poppy802 · 09/05/2023 11:01

This is really helpful..also having the same issues!!!

clary · 08/05/2023 09:30

woesofme · 08/05/2023 08:38

You’ve been so helpful and I’m so grateful. Yesterday dd was completely overwhelmed and about to give up on the poetry completely. Your advice has turned it around for her 100% and she’s feeling more confident already.

OP I was going to post what everyone else said then saw that they had! Also my knowledge is more AQA and I see some teachers of Edexcel have posted here so that's great.

So just to add that this is great news that your DD is feeling more positive. Well done to her already and best of luck for the exams. MN can be such a helpful and supportive forum.

Bobbybobbins · 08/05/2023 08:51

I'm a secondary English teacher and I agree with the above - choose a smaller number of poems to know really well (6-8) can work. It's so rubbish that the whole thing is closed book, ridiculous memory test.

woesofme · 08/05/2023 08:38

You’ve been so helpful and I’m so grateful. Yesterday dd was completely overwhelmed and about to give up on the poetry completely. Your advice has turned it around for her 100% and she’s feeling more confident already.

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MrsCobbit · 07/05/2023 21:02

Get the CGP guide on Edexcel conflict - on the back page they have a grid for comparison poems. While AQA have repeated poems Edexcel have not repeated yet. Their unexamined poems are Class Game, Cousin Kate, COTLB, Prelude, Sennacherib, and The Man He Killed. Make sure she knows Exposure, Belfast Confetti, Catrin, and one of the other identity poems.

Pieceofpurplesky · 07/05/2023 20:39

@NormasJeans they are the AQA poems - OP's DC is doing Edexel

NormasJeans · 07/05/2023 17:51

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OutDamnedSpot · 07/05/2023 17:41

Just like the others have said - working knowledge of all 15 (like “this one is about…”) and then choose five to revise in detail. That way, whichever one comes up on the paper will at least be recognisable for her, and she can choose one of her five as the comparison. It’s only worth 20 marks. She should spend half as much time revising this as she does for her Shakespeare / Modern Text / 19th C Lit (which are worth 40 marks each).

keiratwiceknightly · 07/05/2023 17:37

Also, any poems she's really stuck on, there's a series of videos on YouTube for the poems, one for each. Put "Edexcel conflict poetry Mary Meredith" into the search box and choose the one she needs to revise from the list.

keiratwiceknightly · 07/05/2023 17:35

I teach this exact thing.

She needs to know one poem per theme - War/ Family or personal conflict /Prejudice/ Nature. She doesn't need to know a quotation for each one though it can be helpful; what she needs to know is something she can say about language eg Cousin Kate has several oxymorons to show the narrator's conflicted thoughts; something about structure eg the rhythm of Charge of the LB is designed to replicate the cantering horses to make it more immersive. She also needs to know something about the context of her chosen poems. Then she also needs to mug up Poppies as that covers all the themes except race so she can relate that to the poem she gets if the named poem is one of her chosen ones. Finally a quick re-read of the others just to give her confidence if one of them comes up.

BarbaraWoodlouse · 07/05/2023 17:33

Is there a revision guide? DD is doing AQA Power and Conflict and from what I can see (Eng Lit graduate) the York Notes do a great job in breaking down what to compare with what in terms of themes etc. There are other good tools online that help get to grips with the texts and far more productive than just staring at index cards of quotes etc. Though they do of course need the key bits memorized too,

doglover90 · 07/05/2023 17:28

Yes, it makes me cross that they don't just have a clean copy of the anthology like they do at A Level. Best of luck to your daughter!