I worried a little about utterly non-sporty DD in a paper mainly abut sport, but she seems happy. She said she did find the surfing extract strangely saddening the thought of a young Victorian woman watching from the sidelines, enthralled by it but unable even to conceive of joining in, whereas the young chap in the other extract couldn't wait to get his kit off she may have used more refined language than that--.
For the corruption in sport, I gather she went for dramatic generalities -- 'like a six-year-old trampolinist, doping in sports is reaching new and alarming heights...'
That's absolutely the longest feedback I've had yet on any exam! She's gone home for a nap. I might need to do the same.