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One single line of poetry....

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Clawdy · 26/06/2015 15:26

that stays with you? Not necessarily your favourite poem but sometimes just one line....for me it's " What will survive of us is love " from the Philip Larkin poem.

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MegMurry · 26/06/2015 22:05

As someone else said, 'a four-foot box, a foot for every year'.

But my dad's favourite Heaney quote would be 'Be advised my passport's green. No glass of ours was ever raised to toast the Queen.'

But I could fill the thread with lines of poetry, to the daily chagrin of my children..

Quietlifenotonyournelly · 26/06/2015 22:03

If you can hold your head when all about you,
are losing theirs and blaming it on you.
'If' by Rudyard Kipling, my favourite poem Smile

100redballoons · 26/06/2015 22:03

Fabulous thread!

My favourite poem ever . . . I'm sorry, but I can't choose just one line:

If I were a cinnamon peeler
I would ride your bed
and leave the yellow bark dust
on your pillow.

Your breasts and shoulders would reek
you could never walk through markets
without the profession of my fingers
floating over you. The blind would
stumble certain of whom they approached
though you might bathe
under rain gutters, monsoon.

Here on the upper thigh
at this smooth pasture
neighbour to your hair
or the crease
that cuts your back. This ankle.
You will be known among strangers
as the cinnamon peeler’s wife.

I could hardly glance at you
before marriage
never touch you
— your keen nosed mother, your rough brothers.
I buried my hands
in saffron, disguised them
over smoking tar,
helped the honey gatherers…

When we swam once
I touched you in water
and our bodies remained free,
you could hold me and be blind of smell.
You climbed the bank and said

this is how you touch other women
the grasscutter’s wife, the lime burner’s daughter.
And you searched your arms
for the missing perfume.
and knew
what good is it
to be the lime burner’s daughter
left with no trace
as if not spoken to in an act of love
as if wounded without the pleasure of scar.

You touched
your belly to my hands
in the dry air and said
I am the cinnamon
peeler’s wife. Smell me.

Michael Ondaatje, The Cinnamon Peeler

TaintedAngel · 26/06/2015 22:03

I loathed poetry at school until I was introduced to Wilfred Owens DULCE ET DECORUM ESTÂ poem. can't pick out a specific line - the full thing hut me like a train and I can still recite it word for word today.

Gasp0deTheW0nderD0g · 26/06/2015 22:03

Also:

This grew; I gave commands;
Then all smiles stopped together.

Utterly chilling. Robert Browning, My Last Duchess. We did it for O level and I've never forgotten it.

dementedma · 26/06/2015 22:02

Wend, not send.

dementedma · 26/06/2015 22:01

Sensitive, seldom and sad are we, as we send our way to the sneezing sea.

whattheseithakasmean · 26/06/2015 22:01

'love set you ticking like a fat gold watch'. Plath is wonderful on motherhood.

Gasp0deTheW0nderD0g · 26/06/2015 22:00

Lovely thread. I've always loved this poem for the richness of the language and the briskness of the rhythm.

Cargoes by John Masefield

Quinquireme of Nineveh from distant Ophir,
Rowing home to haven in sunny Palestine,
With a cargo of ivory,
And apes and peacocks,
Sandalwood, cedarwood, and sweet white wine.

Stately Spanish galleon coming from the Isthmus,
Dipping through the Tropics by the palm-green shores,
With a cargo of diamonds,
Emeralds, amethysts,
Topazes, and cinnamon, and gold moidores.

Dirty British coaster with a salt-caked smoke stack,
Butting through the Channel in the mad March days,
With a cargo of Tyne coal,
Road-rails, pig-lead,
Firewood, iron-ware, and cheap tin trays.

Skippersocks · 26/06/2015 21:58

Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths,
Enwrought with golden and silver light,
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
Of night and light and the half-light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

whattheseithakasmean · 26/06/2015 21:58

'I should have been a pair of ragged claws, scuttling across floors of silent seas'. From the obviously much loved Wasteland

'We are dying, Egypt, dying'. The wonderful Louis MacNeice - I also love his 'manhole among the hollyhocks.'

'Never again would birdsong be the same
And to do that to birds was why she came'. Frost

'We should be careful of each other
We should be kind, while there is still time'. That old softy Larkin

Alwayswiththechords · 26/06/2015 21:57

Sneak home and pray you'll never know
the hell where youth and laughter go

'Suicide in the trenches' by S. Sassoon

FraggleHair · 26/06/2015 21:56

Heart, we will forget him, you and I, tonight.

Emily Dickinson

Alwayswiththechords · 26/06/2015 21:55

^Sneak home and pray you'll never know
the hell where youth and laughter go^

'Suicide in the trenches' by S. Sassoon

DirectorOfBetter · 26/06/2015 21:54

Thus though we cannot make our sun stand still, yet we can make him run.

Passmethecrisps · 26/06/2015 21:53

I shall post mine before reading back.

One line "they fuck you up your mum and dad"

Or

"A four foot box. A foot for every year

flamingtoaster · 26/06/2015 21:51

This was in a very old poetry book my mother had - I thought it was hilarious and have never forgotten it:

When the kitchen boiler burst,
Mother simply sat and cursed,
Father with a finer feeling
Scraped the housemaid off the ceiling.

A single line which has also stayed with me:

Love conquers all. and we must yield to Love

scottishmerlottish · 26/06/2015 21:51

This was from The Eve of St Agnes (Keats) from my English O Level.

At the time my life was full of poverty and I loved the sheer richness of these words and images:

"And still she slept in azure lidded sleep,
In blanched linen, smooth and lavendered,
While he from for the closet brought a heap
Of candied apple, quince and plum and gourd
With jellies soother than the creamy curd
And lucent syrups , tinct with cinnamon
Manna and dates, in Argosy transferred
From Fez, and spiced dainties every one
From silken Samercand, to cedered Lebanon.

I spent a lot of time in my crappy secondary modern dreaming of silken Samercand and cedered Lebanon (and the mysterious 'he' who brought all the bounty forth!)

FraggleHair · 26/06/2015 21:50

there's a bluebird in my heart that
wants to get out
but I'm too tough for him
I say, stay in there, I'm not going
to let anybody see
you.

Charles Bukowski - Bluebird

marshmallowpies · 26/06/2015 21:46

PausingFlatly, isn't Dover Beach amazing? It's like he saw the whole 20th century unfolding in advance, world wars and the collapse of civilisation and all. Yikes. The Second Coming by Yeats makes me feel terrified and excited in exactly the same way.

My other favourite Yeats lines - 'A terrible beauty is born' from Easter 1916, and 'I'll lie down, where all ladders start/in the foul rag & bone shop of the heart' (The Circus Animals Desertion).

My favourite line from Sylvia Plath is from You're:
'Right, like a well-done sum/A clean slate, with your own face on'

Shakespeare I could quote forever but I love most of all 'There is special providence in the fall of a sparrow...'

Can't bear GM Hopkins...sorry!

Shakey1500 · 26/06/2015 21:45

"How is it one can recognise, another, in another's eyes"

MrsWooster · 26/06/2015 21:44

reducing all that's made
to a green thought in a green shade
Marvell 'the garden'

plus both the Yeats about aging which pp's chose. bah.

scottishmerlottish · 26/06/2015 21:44

Oh, these are great - keep them coming!

flatbellyfella · 26/06/2015 21:41

Along the ridge, a moonbeam danced,shedding light on whiskers bright.

Me....

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