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A level literature unseen poem panic!

34 replies

Liesmorelies · 11/06/2025 19:44

Can anyone reassure me/ds about this? He sat his unseen paper today and, having discussed it with his friends and then looked it up online, it seems he has interpreted the poem completely differently from everyone else and from the accepted interpretation online. Totally differently - themes and everything.

He is very able - predicted A star and did a practice paper this week and was given full marks. I say this to point out it will have been well-written and structured and he says he addressed the assessment objectives as normal, but what if his interpretation is just wrong?

The mark scheme says it's ok as long as 'valid', but what does that mean? I have just read the poem (did this A level years ago) and I don't agree with ds but can see where he got his ideas from. I think he's over-thought it rather than simply misunderstood.

Any ideas about how this might affect his mark would be much appreciated!

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Liesmorelies · 11/06/2025 21:56

It's Sonnet 54 by Edmund Spencer.

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BarbaraVineFan · 11/06/2025 21:49

Yes, please tell us the poem

ButteredRadishes · 11/06/2025 21:40

Well, which poem is it?

LarkAscendings · 11/06/2025 21:38

Maybe La Belle Dame sans Merci, I can see how that would relate to death as well.

ClawsandEffect · 11/06/2025 21:38

If he's totally rooted his analysis in textual evidence (quotes), he should be OK. More than one perspective / POV should always be addressed but they don't have to be the standard mainstream interpretation. The rule is mark what's there, not what isn't.

OofyProsser2 · 11/06/2025 21:35

What’s the poem?

Liesmorelies · 11/06/2025 21:31

The more I read the poem the more worried I am. It's about unrequited love and he's interpreted the uninterested woman to be death - as if he took the poem above literally!

Nothing like this has happened to him before so it's a bit shocking.

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clary · 11/06/2025 21:07

@Liesmorelies my understanding (and Eng lit esp A level is not my subject) is that any valid interpretation is acceptable. That's certainly true for (for example) the book you analyse in MFL A level.

Think about Tissue, on the GCSE AQA spec (but will never be the given poem as it’s too hard) – there are many ways to analyse that poem and what it means.

Can you say what the poem was and what his interpretation was? There are some English teachers on this board who may help.

Love that Bilston one @CrispyK !

CrispyK · 11/06/2025 19:53

I don’t think there’s a right interpretation. I think it depends how well he has put this forward using examples from the poem and with reference to poetic devices?

Im sure someone will be along with more knowledge than me, but this should provide some pertinent amusement in the meantime….

The Unseen Poem, Brian Bilston

OK. Turn the page. Right, here goes …
The first line’s straightforward, I suppose.
At least I know what the words all mean.
It has an AA BB rhyming scheme.

What’s that French word for when one line
runs into the next? Jambon? Never mind.
Susan Jenkins is smiling, I bet she knows.
Oh great! Now the rhymes have disappeared

and the language is getting more obfuscatory
by the stanza. The voice keeps changing.
At first, it was confident. But now it’s confused
uncertain (?) and … hesitant?

and as for this bit
what was the poet even thinking?

(personally, i think
they must have been drinking)

Susan Jenkins needs more paper.
I hate her. There are ten minutes left.
What’s this poem all about anyway?
No idea. I shall just have to guess.

I’ll say it’s a metaphor for death.