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Name for a fictional 11 year old girl please

58 replies

Ponymum · 31/05/2009 16:20

Well you lot seem to know what you are talking about, so would you mind suggesting / commenting on names for a fictional girl I am trying to create?

I am writing a book for ages 9-12. Three girls aged 11 are fiends. Two girls are Polly and Annabel. Need a name for the third friend. Any suggestions?

Constraints are:

  • Needs to be distinct from the other two names so that it is easy to tell the characters apart
  • I want to avoid having all three girls with predictable middle class girly names, IYKWIM! i.e. reject Charlotte, Olivia, Lucy, etc
  • I want a slightly "older" name, i.e. not top of today's popular list. But is anyone actually called Karen, Rachel, etc these days? Is that believable?
  • The character's dad is something like a property developer, made his own money but not born to it
  • She is currently Melanie which I think works for her, but I want to change it as it sounds too similar to Annabel (Mel, Bel, both 3 syllables)
  • It would be ideal if it worked with Sykes as a surname.

So sorry that I am asking about a fictional person's name when there are real babies out there needing names! But if you can spare the time it would really help me out.

Any suggestions?

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Bounty2009 · 03/06/2009 11:27

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jellybeans · 02/06/2009 18:08

Leonie
Tabitha

LightShinesInTheDarkness · 02/06/2009 15:37

thell - my own name follows that pattern exactly, how interesting! And my DD's, now I think of it!

thell · 02/06/2009 00:36

Yes, my own experience is that children have shortened their name to two syllables, then one syllable as older teens/ young adults; so Jennifer was called Jennifer by her mum, Jenny by school friends, then Jen as an adult! (and I know two Jens!)

The only Rebecca I know is now a Bec, but was probably Becky or Becca at school. I prefer Becca actually, but does that mean it should be Becky? or Becca ?? Obviously I'm not much good at this,...

LightShinesInTheDarkness · 01/06/2009 19:15

A quick survey of the only 10-year old in this house has revealed that - Becky is short for Rebecca!

TwoScrambled · 01/06/2009 18:58

Kate

Housemum · 01/06/2009 13:55

Was going to suggest a couple but see you have your shortlist! Rebecca and Rachel are definitely the right sorts of names, DD1 calls her friend Becca, she knows another Becky, but definitely no Bec or Becs. Rachel is often shortened to Rach in speaking, though if she writes a card to her she would write Rachel.

dongles · 01/06/2009 13:33

Becca sounds less middle class than Rebecca somehow. It goes well with Polly and Annabel, but I'd be tempted to go with an ethnic sounding name myself (aspiring author here too- how far on are you with your book?).

FairLadyRantALot · 01/06/2009 13:25

Becs...that is what my friends daughter is referred, too...

Ponymum · 01/06/2009 13:17

This is great, thanks. Loads of great suggestions. I have come down to:
Rebecca Sykes
Jessica Sykes
Rachel Sykes

There are other names suggested which I think are really good but I can't use them because they are DD's name, my name, my mum's name, another character's name, etc! (Sorry if your suggestion is one of these.) As it is, if I use Jessica then another character in the book needs a new name... . But that one is less critical and easier to replace if needed.

I like Rebecca but my only problem is how to shorten it, which 11 year old girls do. The book is narrated in the first person by Polly, so it has to look and feel convincing on the page as she tells the story. Does she say Bec, Becca, Becky, or Becs? (Jessica is easy to shorten to Jess, and Rachel is just Rachel, which is fine.)

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scarletlilybug · 01/06/2009 12:30

Maia/Maya?

Louise?

Natasha?

Natalie?

Melissa?

Hannah?

Rowena?

dongles · 01/06/2009 12:08

Claire

dongles · 01/06/2009 12:07

Kate
Nell
Fern
Joanne
Nicky
Ellen

Love this thread. I posted for a fictional 11 year old girl before (but didn't let on).

thedolly · 01/06/2009 10:22

Suzie

EyeballsintheSky · 01/06/2009 10:20

13 yo girls I know are

Sarah
Caroline
Emily
Laura
Anna

Kayteee · 01/06/2009 10:09

Tamsin or Verity

pranma · 01/06/2009 09:55

I love Joanna with Jo or Josie for short
still think Laura is good with Sykes could be Laurie nn

pinkem · 31/05/2009 21:51

I vote Emma!

MrsWeasley · 31/05/2009 21:50

Emma
Georgia
louise
Amber
Jade
Sian
Claire
Jennifer
Elizabeth
Katy
Kayleigh
Lorna
laura
?

Anygood?

GossipMonger · 31/05/2009 21:44

Joanna Mason

Josephine Sawyer

Helen O'Sullivan

Catrina Foster

Louisa Jenkins

Nell King

Briony Pirsons

jkklpu · 31/05/2009 21:11

Donna

wahwahwah · 31/05/2009 20:06

Katie
Alice
Poppy

conniedescending · 31/05/2009 20:06

Summer Sykes

FairLadyRantALot · 31/05/2009 20:06

Trying to think what the names were around the time my es was born (he will be 13, but roughly there)...

Jade
Claire
Amber
Emily
Naomi
Nataly
Bethany
Helen

LessThenIdeal · 31/05/2009 20:01

Madeline

Joanna

Rhian

Rowenna