There is some good knowledge and use of
digraphs there, such as -ew, ee. aw and oa. That's embedded year 1/2 level. But the handwriting and mixture of capital and lower case letters isn't great. Perhaps instead of focusing on handwriting, look into retain primitive reflexes. Some hand, eye, brain exercises to connect both sides of the brain together and to the fine motor control. Not straight to practicing handwriting.