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opinions on this please

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suzywong · 07/09/2008 13:28

"layer after layer of security and fencing that shrink slowly "

should it be shrinkS slowly as the subject of the verb shrink is a singer layer?

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suzywong · 07/09/2008 13:31

singLe layer, not singer

easily done but then I don't get to hand this post to a sub team on the Independent on Sunday as the author of the sentence in question presumably did

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Tigerschick · 07/09/2008 13:31

Don't know really but my instinct would be shrink as there are apparently two things shrinking (security and fencing).

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ChipButty · 07/09/2008 13:33

IMO 'layer after layer' suggests the plural layers and therefore shrink is correct. However, I do think the sentence could perhaps be rewritten as it doesn't read well.

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