So started a masters 15 years after having come out of education. We have a deadline for an essay and it's a pretty academic subject. I struggled with the essay but got a draft done which I was pretty happy with and sent it to the tutor to critique. I am a bit confused by her feedback.
From this, do you think she means I am in the right track, at a pass level but need to do these things to get a good pass OR at the moment it's a fail and I need to do these things to turn it into a pass?
• You cover the right broad areas, but possibly spend too long discussing ??? and not enough discussing ? ?
• Good use of section headings but at times the order is confusing -
• Some evidence of critical thinking and of an understanding of the complexity - for instance in the section on the ????- do more of this!
• Remember to avoid the narrative/informal style such as: We can see that it still lacks detail.Â
• Have a chat with the writing and learning centre and read more journal articles so the academic style starts to feel more natural to you
• Be careful to avoid sounding like we know these things for certain - or that we know ???? for certain - it is all about building up theories from the evidence available (which changes over time)
• Avoid sweeping statements or opinions (such as your concluding sentence)
• Do some careful proofreading - there are some punctuation errors (such as unnecessary use of capital letters, we only need these for proper nouns
• Avoid long quotations, wherever possible paraphrase in your own words
I have a week now to deadline and I am panicking now it's not going to pass.
I have replaced some details that might be outing with ? ??
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Do you think this means pass or fail? Excluding the basic proof reading errors
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mummyrocks1 · 02/11/2019 23:38
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