Is it incorrect to write 'I started walking towards the trees, the call of exotic birds ringing in my ears'? I'm sure it's correct, but DS's teacher has corrected it to 'was ringing in my ears'. If it's right, can anyone tell me what the tense is (e.g. past continuous or something).
I wouldn't usually be so pedantic, but in the same piece of writing she has corrected his spelling of 'squawking' from 'squaking' to 'squarking'. And she has also written that 'the island was starting to loose it's appeal'
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JordanBaker · 23/09/2011 16:36
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