GODS GARDEN POEM CAN I HAVE SOME PROOF READERS PLEASE SEE POST BELOW

[salsmum]

i wrote this poem intitled 'gods garden' thought it might help some parents who are feeling a little low.
can i have some comments like/hate before i have it printed in my local s n newsletter?
thanx mums/dads.
xj
p.s. its on the posts below.

[ShinyHappyPeopleHoldingHands]

Where? Below what?

[staryeyed]

I think its lovely- nearly brought me to tears. Only I was at work when I read it so bit my lip.

[salsmum]

SORRY 4GOT TO SAY ITS IN SPECIAL NEEDS LISTING/DISCUSSION POSTED TUES&WEDS LAST WEEK. [I'M NEW TO THIS SITE N A LITTLE SENIOR LOL 45]
SO BEAR WITH ME.
THANX STARYEYED [SMILE]

[magsi]

Absolutely lovely!!!!. Publish it immediately (she says wiping away the tears!!!).

[Jenkeywoo]

thank you for this lovely poem, you've left me in tears on a day I was feeling very brave I thought! beautiful words.