If the first line is for eg:
Betty is eating an apple.
Should the second be:
"Can I have a bite?" said Bob
Or
"Can I have a bite? says Bob (that sounds weird!)
I know I sound incredibly dense but I've got my tenses in a muddle!
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GlueSticksEverywhere · 23/01/2012 14:41
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