Please have a quick read

[DaisyAdare]

Hi all

I’m had a go at my first ever blog, I would love any feedback:

babyterrorsandtriumphs.blogspot.com/2021/02/if-women-are-from-venus-and-men-are.html?m=1#more

[fistasledge]

Hi there. As a new mum, thought I'd give this a read but I'm on my iPhone and the font is so tiny, I can't read it 😞
If I zoom in, it means I have to keep moving the screen to follow the line.

So I didn't get very far! Wonder if you can amend the font to be bigger and then I might have more luck!

Hope this is helpful even though it's not about the content!

[iklboo]

The font is really difficult to read. DH is dyslexic and would struggle with it.

[PennyRoyal]

As PP have said, the font is not great on a phone (I haven't tried on laptop) so it kind of lost me and I skipped through rather than read properly.

[celiafforcandle]

Yes, I liked it as it is.
If you wanted to turn it into a magazine article might the style and vocabulary be softened or 'lengthened'
Fifteen minute reading on Radio 4? Read it aloud in an empty room and time it.