the ivory might be okay but personally (not that i'm a style guru by any stretch of the imagination) i'd pick out the orangey colour or better still the greeny/aqua colour.
I love the style of the ivory shrug though.
They only have sizes 10 and 26 in stock in chocolate on that last one . I too found the coral one whilst you were posting, but I don't think the colour is quite right. Agree that shorter would be better.
Second one only available in 8 or 10 furball, but dh is showing enthusiasm for the first, as am I. Been a long time since I bought Monsoon (used to live it in back when I was a 14/16) - is their sizing generous these days?