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Hi, I'm writing a poem for my sisters wedding. Does this good english or not? With the biggest smile you've seen. I know it should be You've ever seen, but that makes it too long for the rhyme. I don't want it to sound wrong, what do you think ?
Sounds fine to me
Oh good. I've read it to my Dad and he said that it should be You've ever seen. What does he know.
well give us a line either side...
Does this good english???? I must be tired.
Would 'With the biggest smile ever seen' work?
Could do. Thanks
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