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Is this good english or not ?

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mummyloveslucy Mon 24-Aug-09 21:12:16

Hi, I'm writing a poem for my sisters wedding.
Does this good english or not?

With the biggest smile you've seen.

I know it should be You've ever seen, but that makes it too long for the rhyme.

I don't want it to sound wrong, what do you think ?

LadyStealthPolarBear Mon 24-Aug-09 21:13:22

Sounds fine to me

mummyloveslucy Mon 24-Aug-09 21:16:09

Oh good. I've read it to my Dad and he said that it should be You've ever seen.
What does he know. grin

LadyStealthPolarBear Mon 24-Aug-09 21:18:19

well give us a line either side...

mummyloveslucy Mon 24-Aug-09 21:18:57

Does this good english????
I must be tired. blush

Winetimeisfinetime Mon 24-Aug-09 21:19:42

Would 'With the biggest smile ever seen' work?

mummyloveslucy Mon 24-Aug-09 21:22:01

Could do. Thanks smile

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