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Summon; summon to; summon for.

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Iris65 · 11/06/2017 10:39

I am reading a Margaret Drabble novel and I am wondering about this phrase:
'It summoned up to her the mystery of the dignity of the tribe...'

It does not seem correct to me and does not read well either. What do you think?

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VintagePerfumista · 13/06/2017 07:12

It reads clumsily because usually the direct object goes before the indirect.

It summoned up the mystery of the tribe to her.

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Iris65 · 13/06/2017 21:23

Thank you. Now I know why it felt wrong.

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scaryclown · 13/06/2017 21:28

I think she did find and replace on 'conjured up' with 'summoned up' then thought too hard about 'summoned to whom?'

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Iris65 · 14/06/2017 08:10

scary interesting suggestion. I have had lots of fun in stuff I have written with the find and replace function!

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