I know this is wrong, and I can sort of explain why, and I can give ways in which it would be right - but what I want is a phrase like 'sentence fragment' or 'comma splice' or 'dangling participle' to use!
Lots and lots of students write things like this:
by doing this, it allows the writer to create an atmosphere of....
by using metaphor in this way, it means that the text is....
So the problem is basically that the 'it' doesn't really respond to anything, and isn't really anything - and when I see 'by', I expect to see a subject - 'by doing this, Shakespeare achieves...'. Or, just write 'Doing this allows the writer to....'/'this use of metaphor enables....'.
But is there some short-hand term I can use here, anyone?
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A simple term to describe why this is wrong?
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TheOriginalSteamingNit · 05/02/2014 12:10
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