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Please tell me if this makes sence.

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mummyloveslucy Mon 24-Aug-09 21:01:41

Hi, I am writing a poem for my sisters wedding. I need to know if it is good english to put

with the biggest smile you've seen?

I know it should be You've ever seen, but that makes it too long.

I don't want it to sound wrong, what do you think ?

Thanks. smile

TheArmadillo Mon 24-Aug-09 21:24:10

you can get away with stuff like that in poems.

Sounds fine - people will know what it means.

mummyloveslucy Wed 26-Aug-09 21:14:07

Thanks. smile

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