Riven, you seem to have willfully missed the whole point of the essay. " Western liberal democracy, or a reasonable imitation of Western liberal democracy when it comes to the rule of law, is still the only kind of society we know about where women are not at the mercy of systematic injustice".
When he says, "In a free society, radical dissatisfaction is usually a condition of mind before it is a response to circumstances, so it has to go somewhere. As atomisation continues in the liberal democracies, the number of candidates for an irresponsible semi-intelligentsia continues to increase. They come from either wing, but are always more vociferous on the Left, because capitalism provides the more blatant source of provocation. One can hardly blame them for that. What is striking is their capacity, once they run out of injustices in liberal democracy that they can blame on capitalism, to look for injustices in the rest of the world that they can blame on liberal democracy."
He is talking about people who say, 'things are far from perfect here - we have no right to think ourselves aby better than cultures who imprison or stone to death rape victims'. To say that with a straight face is to endulge in the worse kind of intellectual and moral bankruptcy.
"We had also better believe that where men alone decide what women's rights are, the results are rarely good." yes, it does stand out. But he is not talking about us here as plainly, men alone do not decide what women's rights are here.
His point is that change has come in the West. And that it only happened after the Refomation. He points out that until the koran can be scrutinised and chuch and state seperated, it will never happen. Things happened slowly in the West becasue no-one was helping. No one had seperated church and state before. Millions died It was the blind leading the blind. That is not the case today.