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Please help with wording for this invitation

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WoolyBoots Fri 02-Jan-15 23:26:33

It's for a meal to celebrate a marriage that has already taken place.
We would love you to join us for a meal to celebrate our marriage
We would love your company for the evening to celebrate our marriage (but this sounds like a party and it's just a small meal!)
Which would read/sound better do you think?

ElviraCondomine Sat 03-Jan-15 21:46:30

I like the first. It's clear and simple, and heartfelt. I think that's more important than some formal wording.

HyperThread Sat 03-Jan-15 21:47:37

Love for you?

WoolyBoots Sat 03-Jan-15 21:50:27

Thanks for the advice, I'll stick with the first then as I would rather it sound heartfelt and simple. Will change it to love for you.... Thanks very much.

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