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effyzm Sun 23-Jun-13 11:54:32 please have a read. Feel free to comment underneath. My husband is starting a writing adventure and would love some feedback. grin

effyzm Sun 23-Jun-13 20:33:26

Bump shock

chocoluvva Sun 23-Jun-13 20:34:19

Your link isn't working!

mamasin Sun 23-Jun-13 20:34:32

your link isn't working

specialsubject Sun 23-Jun-13 22:30:09

Copy and paste and the link works.

writing style: generally good but a few misplaced apostrophes, missing commas and a lot of cliches. Also some slip-ups; needs more proof-reading.

content - the picture is of pound coins, so I assume you are aiming at a UK audience. Although the other blogs seem to be American...?

- energy saving light bulbs were cheap for a while and NOW cost an arm and a leg.
- shopping overseas doesn't really make sense from Britain, with poor exchange rates, delivery charges and import charges.
- washing the car by hand needs only a sponge and water and is ALWAYS cheaper than paying someone!
- the comment about 'women sneaking around turning up the thermostat' is really juvenile.


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