Advanced search

Can I have a 'proud mummy moment' and share my dd's poem?

(8 Posts)
Ellbell Mon 20-Oct-08 19:59:20

I'm putting it here because I think it's very creative and I thought it might look less like bragging in here. wink

Dd1 is 8 and she has just written this in the 5 minutes' 'play-time' I gave her before bed. (She does read a lot, so it's feasible that she's got some of these images from somewhere, but I think it's rather good...)


Is a sea of darkness drowning all light

A blanket of shadows covering the sleeping day

A servant of the moon bringing starry wine to his master

A raven landing in the yellow yew tree of day-light.

The night takes many forms but above all is a dream bringer.

nickytwoooohtimes Mon 20-Oct-08 20:03:10

It is wonderful.
Clever wee lassie!

nooOOOoonki Mon 20-Oct-08 20:05:13

that is fabulous smile

harleyd Mon 20-Oct-08 20:06:18


my 7yo dd was writing out the lyrics to avril lavignes 'girlfriend' at bedtime hmm

Ellbell Mon 20-Oct-08 20:14:05

<<glows with pride>>

Thanks! Your dd is just practising, harleyd, so she's ready when inspiration strikes!

RubyRioja Mon 20-Oct-08 20:15:41

Message withdrawn at poster's request.

Ellbell Mon 20-Oct-08 20:20:11

<<Awww>> at 'I love you mummy' in pastry. Bless!

RubyRioja Mon 20-Oct-08 20:27:51

Message withdrawn at poster's request.

Join the discussion

Registering is free, easy, and means you can join in the discussion, watch threads, get discounts, win prizes and lots more.

Register now »

Already registered? Log in with: