I submitted a commercial/literary contemporary novel to a small genre publisher via a contest (a twitter pitch not aimed at them in particular). Having seen the full MS they've come back with a lovely letter to say they loved it, can I revise and resubmit. Generally they seem happy with it as it stands, except they don't like that it is in present tense.
As any writer will appreciate it's a small ask (i.e. not tons of editorial problems), but a major task, to go through the whole bloody thing and change all the tenses to past tense. It's been seen by an independent editor who loved it and didn't comment on tense, critique partners and beta readers have either loved the present tense or hadn't really noticed. I know it's often a matter of personal taste. There are also thematic reasons why present tense makes sense. It was a very conscious decision.
The independent editor who saw my work last week advised me to go after big mainstream agents first, so I suspect I won't be resubmitting to these publishers. Obviously though if the tense is going to be a big barrier, it'd be better to sort before I submit to the mainstream agents.
This is my first book and my first submission to anyone.
Any thoughts or advice please?
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Pollaidh · 19/10/2017 12:12
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