Hi all,
I was on here before years (and several name changes) ago, but lapsed. I'd be interested in the advice of the more experienced among you on my current situation.
I've been writing and rewriting this novel for several years. A couple of years ago, an earlier version of it was longlisted in one prestigious first novel contest and shortlisted in another, and part of the prize was a discounted editorial full read. Which was complimentary but also felt it needed a radical structural rethink and major cutting as it was very baggy. I set about doing that, but eventually realised it wouldn't do, so did a complete rewrite, starting from a blank document.
I cut a narrator, switched it to first person, moved the timeline essentially it's an entirely different, much shorter, novel about the same set of people and even the people are characterised differently. I now think it's a much stronger novel. However, just as an experiment, I entered the beginning of the new version into one of the competitions I was longlisted in two years ago, and it didn't make the longlist.
I'm now no longer trusting my judgement that I've written a better, tighter novel. A bit of me thinks this means only that this set of readers didn't like it as much as other competing novels, but another bit of me thinks it's actually a really bad sign, and that I've dispensed with whatever good qualities the original version had which got it noticed out of over 1000 novels first time around. It still needs a second-last chapter, and then I was planning to send it to a friend to read, but I honestly don't know quite what to do now, as I feel it's possible this is actually a worse novel than it was two years ago, and I've lost faith in it, rather.
Any thoughts? Should I consider another editorial read?The friend is an excellent reader, and has offered, but it might be a very difficult position to put her in, especially as she knows how hard I've worked on it.
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Disheartened by my virtually complete, multiply re-edited novel?
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Mumchance · 22/05/2017 20:01
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