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An important plot detail in the novel I'm writing involves the opening up of a sink hole in someone's garden.
(don't laugh, it actually happened to someone I know)
For credibility only, not relevant to the plot... if this was YOUR house, who is the FIRST person you would ring?
The house is owned by a 40-something divorcee, and at the time it happens she has her 19 year old daughter there, who is hysterical.
There are no services (gas, water etc) involved and its not life-threatening, (other than the obvious worry about whether the house is affected)
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Please may I ask for help with a plot detail?
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FineSally · 01/02/2017 09:10
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