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Any Volunteers to read my rhyming story?

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dontthinktwiceitsalright Fri 17-Jul-15 18:12:38

I was wondering if anyone would be interested in giving me a critique of my rhyming story. I've been editing it for a while now but really need some fresh eyes to look at it. It's only 600 words and for the 4-8 age group.

Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

If anybody fancies it just PM me with your email address and I can send it over.

TheHouseOnBellSt Fri 17-Jul-15 20:03:06

I'll have a look. smile I'm a published writer.

dontthinktwiceitsalright Fri 17-Jul-15 20:18:06

Oh thank you ! smile

It honestly could be terrible but I guess this is the only way to find out

TheHouseOnBellSt Fri 17-Jul-15 21:20:54

Absolutely...I'm won't be mean...I'll be helpful hopefully.x

nipplequestion Sun 19-Jul-15 10:17:27

I can have a look too if you would like?

melonribena Sun 19-Jul-15 10:31:16

I'll have a look. I teach that age group

Theselittlelightsaremine Sun 19-Jul-15 10:38:50

I can have a look, I have a DC in that age group so can read it to them and get their opinion too.

dontthinktwiceitsalright Sun 19-Jul-15 13:42:08

Oh gosh thank you all ! I've changed a bit so I'll just double check its all in one piece smile

FeelingSmurfy Sun 19-Jul-15 13:49:07

I am happy to help smile

dontthinktwiceitsalright Sun 19-Jul-15 15:05:16

Thank you all , just give me a pm with your email addresses smile

FeelingSmurfy Sun 19-Jul-15 16:39:31

Just checking what format it will be in smile

dontthinktwiceitsalright Sun 19-Jul-15 16:48:06

Pdf ok ? If not I can ask dh to change it for me.

HaventAStitchToWear Fri 24-Jul-15 20:39:00

I'd love to have a look if you still need some feedback, my mum teaches that age group and I'm a journalist (read: was a journalist before I had kiddies!) smile

YerTiz Fri 24-Jul-15 20:40:12

Ooh I'd love to read it!

tatumsfunkychicken Fri 24-Jul-15 20:45:04

Yes please!! I'm depute of a Primary school and I have a toddler, he adores rhyming stories.

Scootergrrrl Fri 24-Jul-15 20:51:47

I'll have a look. I'm a copy editor and ex-newspaper sub.

dontthinktwiceitsalright Sat 25-Jul-15 17:48:43

Thank you everyone smile I think I've sent it to everyone who sent me an email
Address smile

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