Anyone fancy critiquing a play-script?

[JohnFarleysRuskin]

Hello,
I have written a play - about three ordinary women who tried to do something extraordinary - and would love some feedback.
I'm very happy to do swaps...
Please let me know if you'd be interested.
Many thanks

[ImperialBlether]

It sounds great, JFR, and I'd love to read it, but I've not read many scripts so I don't know how useful I could be. Are you going to send it to the BBC Writing Room?

[JohnFarleysRuskin]

Ah thanks for your reply, Imperial. You very kindly read a TV script for me (and gave me some helpful feedback) about 18 months ago - name changed!

The Writers Room have now got submission windows for different genres, I think the next one I can go for is in Autumn. The one I sent before - that you helped with - got selected to the last 20% but alas not the last 5%. I'm still pushing it out there, a bit.

If you still would like to read this new piece, that would be great, but I can appreciate its tres dull reading the same author/same style(?) again. Either way, if you've got anything you need critiquing do let me know.

[GreedyGonzales]

Hi JFR, I'd be happy to read it. I used to teach an undergraduate playwriting course and miss reading new plays!

[JohnFarleysRuskin]

Ah thank you Greedy, I'll PM you.

[Tilda123]

If you're still looking I'd be happy to do a play swap?

[JohnFarleysRuskin]

Hi Tilda, I'll PM you.