Hi everyone - I am writing a children's book, and I describe a character as a "fat laying hen". I wanted to gage a general feel to whether as parents you feel this is simply descriptive, whether anyone feels that referring to a laying hen as fat has negative connotations and just general feedback to using the word "fat" to describe an animal.
All feedback welcomed!
Please or to access all these features
Please
or
to access all these features
Join in for children's book recommendations.
Children's books
Using "fat" to describe a hen...
6 replies
crumpetcrumpets · 07/03/2016 11:22
OP posts:
Please create an account
To comment on this thread you need to create a Mumsnet account.