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Devilishy Delicious desserts review

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kfever10 Wed 03-Apr-13 15:40:14

Would love some feedback on my recent review post - I am new to this so any comments taken on board!
Family Fever - Devilishly Delicious review

fcknits Thu 04-Apr-13 00:30:22

I love the fact that you've included plenty of photos! Really helps to follow the review story.

You might want to check the formatting and spelling e.g. "definetley". However, it's still very readable and with a touch of humour too. smile

I think you've made a good job of it and I enjoyed reading your post.

HTH x

racheyp Fri 05-Apr-13 18:59:03

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