I wrote a housey pop song. Would anyone be able to review it for me?

(4 Posts)
hutchblue Fri 18-Apr-14 10:51:19

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUaXIEMm4XM

It's only 2 mins long as it's a preview - so just the first verse and chorus - not much time needed to lend from your ears and there's even a little video to go with it!

Any feedback very gratefully received as I really want to improve.

Thank you smile

deedeelondon Fri 18-Apr-14 22:02:21

Oh why did you remove it?

AnotherSpinningFuckingRainbow Fri 18-Apr-14 22:06:10

I'd be interested in giving you some feedback if you put the video up?

hutchblue Tue 29-Apr-14 13:44:05

Hi, sorry, I took that version down as I had to remove the graphics that was on that old version.
This was due to being told they were off-putting in another thread I cross-posted in Chat. I did as I was told grin and it was good feedback.

Anyway, here it is, would love any more feedback if you have time to listen and comment:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PAJPFq3m1S0

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