Child - Sophie
Mother - Teresa - 22 years
Father - Joe - 25 years
Grandma - Betty - Joe?s Mum - 47 years
Grandpa - William - Joe?s Dad - 51 years
When she was born, Sophie was the apple of her Grandmother?s eye. Grandma Betty had had three sons and had longed for a daughter. Teresa, Sophie?s mum, had wanted a son and didn?t even try to hide her disappointment. What a shame that Betty and Teresa couldn?t swap a generation.
Joe wasn?t there at Sophie?s birth. The pregnancy had been a shock to him and in truth, he had wanted Teresa to have a termination. She had considered it but thought that Joe would come round and marry her if she had his son. No wonder she wasn?t happy at having a girl. Joe and Teresa had been together for three years and had always had a passionate but volatile relationship. Joe was a free spirit and just wanted to have fun. He certainly didn?t want to get married and have children. He felt too young for that. Teresa had had a difficult upbringing and she felt if she had a child she would have someone to love her and a family of her own. She had felt that Joe was going to leave and felt a baby would stay. He thought she was still taking the contraceptive pill but she hadn?t renewed her prescription. She blamed her pregnancy on an upset stomach and Joe never knew any different.
The day that Sophie was born, bang on time, was cold, grey, wet and the middle of October. Initially Teresa was an attentive mother and Joe tried hard but it wasn?t what we wanted and while his baby was still in her hospital cot he went home, packed a bag and left. Teresa never saw him again.
William and Betty met on a Monday, had a picnic together on the Wednesday, talked about marriage on the Friday, were engaged on Sunday. They married 6 weeks later, the earliest they could. They rented a small cottage together and gradually they made it home. William was a carpenter and betty was a machinist. Usually women gave up work when they married but William was a modern man for the time and supported his new wife?s wish to carry on working. Four years after they were married they were blessed by the arrival of Martin followed by Frank and then Joe. They had a very loving and happy life together and Martin and frank had good careers in the carpentry industry while Joe was happy taking jobs here and there, bar work mainly.
William and Betty were doting Grandparents and saw Teresa and Sophie three times a week. One day they would take Sophie out on their own and the other days they would take Teresa out for lunch or all have tea at Grandma and Grandad?s little cottage. Time went on, all seemed well though Joe never asked about his daughter and Teresa soon had other admirers.
Betty was making an apple crumble when the telephone rang. ?Hello?? Betty went pale and had to sit down. It was the last thing she was expecting. It had been Teresa on the phone and she was having Sophie adopted.
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